If Only You Tried

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
This is based on my sister's relationship, but, there are a few major differences.

1. My sister and he are not broken up.
2. My sister seems to show no mercy (she has righteous reasons it seems)
(I got this just be listening to a phone call)
Please enjoy!
And, remember- constructive criticism is welcome!
~
Liz

Submitted: June 29, 2008

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If only you tried
Then this may have worked!
If you hadn’t lied and deceived
Then, maybe we still could be.
Baby, I love you
I will give you that fact.
And maybe we would have found
What our relationship lacked.
If’s and but’s are meaningless now
We could have fixed it, but how!?
I tried so hard, you wouldn’t believe
I loved you so much, you’re my baby.
But, I must move on
‘Cus, Baby, you lost me
I only wish it weren’t true
But, Honey, I gotta do what I gotta do


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