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ah venting poetry ^^ yes, i've done my own share of venting poetry. t'is quite all right my friend. its okay to write about the same thing.
and you did, but you wrote it differently than the other one - so its still an enjoyable read.
i really liked how everything rhymed with "these"
i didn't realize that until i finished i was like "heeeey all of those rhyme!" hahaha! XD
i like the third stanza the best :) the carrying of his voice is what i like about it ^^
again - great job!
keep it up ^^
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good job liz! like alice said, its coolio venting poetry. i like the 2nd stanza the best! goo job!
~Lemon
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thank youuuuuuuuuuuuu!
What a lovely poem :)
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thank youuuuuuuu!
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hi liz!!!!!!!!!!!
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hi!
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