Lovely lotus

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is a poem IshaSanaulla and I worked on back in October. Just has taken me a while to post it. I Hope it is okay, please leave as much criticism as possible. As much as I hate saying this... Just read it to find out what it's about. The poem is short, not a long read at all. I imagine there are plenty of mistakes. I do not own the picture.

The red is as dark as blood.

Like whips of scarlet ink branding my skin.

Huanted voices whisper sweet deceptions, delusions and delirium.

Thump, thump, thump my heart beats like a djembe.

Lost to a world hooded in a colorless haze.

Impossible to stop thinking, imposible to leave.

Nightmares live and breath like you and me.

Demons watch idly waiting for me to fail.

As the curtains close lightening strikes.

Dark energy crackles mischievously.

Bursting like a bubble.


Submitted: December 20, 2014

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khawaja isha sanaullah

Very nice. I love it :) thankyou friend

Thu, December 25th, 2014 2:27pm

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No problem it was lovely working with you.

Thu, December 25th, 2014 10:06am

taramonara

Beautiful!

Sun, January 11th, 2015 2:21am

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Thanks a lot for your feedback.

Tue, January 13th, 2015 3:26pm

Elouise Johnson

this is beautiful to read, it has a darkness to it that I love

Tue, January 27th, 2015 9:33pm

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Thank you for reading and leaving a comment. I appreciate your feed back and your time.

Tue, January 27th, 2015 7:42pm

Art of Ambrosia

Clear and straight to the point and very entertaining.

Tue, February 17th, 2015 4:00pm

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Thanks for taking the time to comment.

Tue, February 17th, 2015 4:23pm

artie1947

I have just come to your work and found that you have a talent in poetry. I would like to follow your poetry and give comment.

Mon, March 2nd, 2015 3:23pm

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Thanks your comment is appreciated. I am however not a big poetry writer. I am glad you enjoyed it and commented. Have a good morning/day/night.

Wed, March 4th, 2015 6:35pm

cosartmic

I like this. Your writing strikes me as strong.

Thu, April 9th, 2015 4:06am

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Thanks for your comment. I am happy you enjoyed reading it.

Sun, April 12th, 2015 11:49am

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