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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic



This a song of a chubby catapillar

Sitting on a tall pillar


He took his golden guitar

And looked at a star


Ling ling ling ling

Blingbling bling

He’s an handsome bachelor

With his bottle of liquor


He was kind and carefree

But definitely a freaky




I want to be a good writer

Want to be a singer


He started playing his drum

Boom boom doom


He’s waiting for his lady love

Where was his love dove


Cling cling cling cling

Ding ding ding


The little caterpillar has to die

To merge as a butterfly


He couldn’t deny and wiped his eye dry

and entered his cacoon saying bye bye


And out came the beautiful butterfly

with wings like Christmas pie


pling pling pling

Submitted: January 03, 2013

© Copyright 2023 thumblina Aka vandana. All rights reserved.

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ben hardstaff

Ha ha ha ha ha you make me laugh. This is funny

Thu, January 3rd, 2013 9:58am


hehehehe.....glad i make you laogh

thank you for your comment

Thu, January 3rd, 2013 2:02am

Sultry Alice

Fun, unique, and campy but cute.

I liked it.


Thu, January 3rd, 2013 8:56pm


Thank you so much really appreciate for your comment

Glad you liked it...

Thu, January 3rd, 2013 3:43pm

Lacy Cornwall

Very cute and funny, Thumblina. I definitely like it.

Thu, January 3rd, 2013 11:45pm


Thank much lucy....

Trying to give people a little happiness or changing their mood and cheering them up

Glad u liked it

Thu, January 3rd, 2013 3:48pm

Lacy Cornwall

Thumblina, do us all a favor and delete that comment from Goodbyebaseball. There's a difference between constructive criticism and just being an evil S.O.B. I have never met a rude person on Booksie... until now.

Thu, January 3rd, 2013 11:55pm

Ben A Vanguarde

There are a few grammatical mistakes:
In the summary, "Friction" should be "Fiction" and "This IA..." should be "This Is..." and "Catapillara" should be "Catapillar"

"BlingBling Bling" should be "Bling Bling Bling".

This is a carefree and frolicking poem. I don't know what Lady Cornwall is referring to (and I don't care because she is right) but this is a light hearted piece to be enjoyed and not dissected for its metaphysical meanings.

You are to be commended to such an enjoyable story.

Fri, January 4th, 2013 1:58am


Yea i will edit the summary...

Thank you for ur comment and glad you enjoyed it....

To keep you updated on lucy's comment is that
A guy whose pen pen name is goodbye football or something like that gave a rude comment on my poam

He said" Omg...kill me ....r u in third grade....

Thu, January 3rd, 2013 6:07pm


It is all funny and full of life... anybody in sad mood gets cheer up once go thru this poem/song...

hats off to u, dolly..:)

Fri, January 4th, 2013 2:16am


Thank you glad u liked it...

Thats my goal in writting this poem.....

To lighten people's mood from their tensions and stressfull life atleast for sometime....

Thu, January 3rd, 2013 6:25pm

Ben A Vanguarde

With reference to bad comments, Jimmy's Girl Friend received 3 bad comments and 300 good ones. These folks are out there but need not concern you.

Booksie is here for our enjoyment and as a laboratory to improve our writing skills.

You're doing fine.

Fri, January 4th, 2013 8:54am

Maddie Patrick

This is such a lighthearted awesome poem. And yes that Goodbyebaseball is a (I'm not going to say what I'm thinking in my mind) let's say jerk. LOL. HE's been doing that on a lot of people's stuff. Anyway I really enjoyed your poem. It made me smile and it brightened up my day. Good job.

Fri, January 4th, 2013 4:17pm


thank you Maddie patrick

glad you liked it...

thanks for the encouragement

i will keep writing more poems like this

Thank you

Fri, January 4th, 2013 8:23am


A little silliness is good now and then.

Sat, January 5th, 2013 11:08pm


Thank you......

Sat, January 5th, 2013 3:14pm

Future Author

Dear, thumblina,

Firstly, I would like to thank you for taking apart in my contest! I have been reading the entries for a while now and yours happens to be the 19th that I have read so far.

I don't know how to put this... Though it was cheerful and fun to read, I really didn't understand it. I don't know. I know that one guy with the bad comment is rude to everyone, but to be honest I have to agree with kind of what he said, but not exactly what he said. I don't agree with the omg kill me portion because this is and never will be that bad, but I do have to agree that this felt as if it were written by a child or maybe a firt stim poet. I don't want or mean to be rude, but that is how I felt. But luckily, your poem isn't judged based off what I like, haha, si no worries. But anywho, I am here to help you, not to be totally rude, so I really hope you take it the way I am trying to be! Oh gosh, here I go with my rambling. But tell me, was this perhaps written for a child audience? Because that would make more sense to me. I don't know. That's my input/opinion...

Overall, good job! I gave this my "I LIKED IT" vote because it deserves that much! It was fun, exciting, and inviting! It really was!

I have so many more entries to read and with the way I am judging them, anyone could win! I would like to say that I am not biased, so it really isn't based upon my liking the entries in the end. I had to do something like that, so it would be fair (Ex: # of reads, comments, and likes, etc.) So really, I am not the only judge here. I wish you the best of luck in the compitition!

Also, I can't remember who I have already asked or not, but I have another contest out right now called, "Chapter Link Contest" so you can join and can keep your mind busy on that while I am judging this current contest. Please follow the link given below to read all the details I have given, so you know what to do. You have until Saturday, March 9th, 2013 to enter this contest.


I sure hope I said everything I wanted to! I'll let you know when the results are up!
Good luck! :D
~future author

Sat, March 2nd, 2013 8:46pm

Future Author

The results are finally in for my Poem and Short Story Entries of my "New Year, New Contest" contest! Did you place in the top three of either genre of writing? Follow this link to find out! Link: If you would like to know your scoring on each of the 10 aspects, please ask me and I would be glad to show you what you scored high on, as well as what you scored low on. Please trust me when I say that none of the entries were bad in anyway and that makes more sense when you see your complete score. Goodness, I cannot believe that this contest is finally over! I hope you had so much fun while participating in my contest because I had so much fun while reading your entry(ies) and I hope to see you in my next contest(s)! :DDDDDDD

~future author

Sun, March 10th, 2013 5:42am


ha!ha!ha!ha!ha!ha! Lol. I love it. so fummy and good.
Thanks for sharing.

Tue, March 19th, 2013 8:10am

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