to dare dream a different way

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Just a little something I wrote.

What if the eyes that knew

saw the garden of Eden.

With walls high and gates locked.

But, every now and then

through a crack in the corners joint

A small mouse limbers through

and he feeds his  many thousand


So I dare dream of an elephant

in the blue sun

crushing the the walls and

letting the garden grow



beyond the corners of the Earth.


What if I dream of shoes however?

Shoes built so that

your legs

become more tired than the bitter ground

until you can't withstand

to walk another mile in those shoes


Which sheds more light out of the garden?

Submitted: April 15, 2012

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wow this is a really amazing poem ,its different i love it,well done :)

Mon, April 16th, 2012 10:00am


Thank-you :D

Mon, April 16th, 2012 5:03am

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