to dare dream a different way

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Just a little something I wrote.

What if the eyes that knew

saw the garden of Eden.

With walls high and gates locked.

But, every now and then

through a crack in the corners joint

A small mouse limbers through

and he feeds his  many thousand

siblings.

So I dare dream of an elephant

in the blue sun

crushing the the walls and

letting the garden grow

further

reaching

beyond the corners of the Earth.

-

What if I dream of shoes however?

Shoes built so that

your legs

become more tired than the bitter ground

until you can't withstand

to walk another mile in those shoes

-

Which sheds more light out of the garden?


Submitted: April 15, 2012

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dravena

wow this is a really amazing poem ,its different i love it,well done :)

Mon, April 16th, 2012 10:00am

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Thank-you :D

Mon, April 16th, 2012 5:03am

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