Follow My Star

Reads: 395  | Likes: 0  | Shelves: 0  | Comments: 5

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Most of my work is purely spontaneous, and i rarely work on anything for longer than ten minutes. Its just an expression of ones self, and my experiences of the beautiful world around me. And magical life experiences. Getting inspiration from little things like standing in my garden on a quiet clear winters night. Which was the inspiration for this poem.

Clear crisp winters nights

One of my ideal delightful sights

Around in the darkness my bright eyes wonder

About what's out there, what's up yonder

 

Trees are bare, cold wet air lingers

Their braches like long black knobbly fingers

Crooked and eerie, in the bright moonlight

Reaching silently up into the night

 

The Stars are exquisite, i wonder out loud

How something so simple, can make me feel proud

To have eyes that can see, beauty all around

If only i could fly, i would surely be star bound

 

To follow a light to a beautiful place

A splenderous world with an elelgant race

A people so enlightened and peacefully new

This is my night time world, and my dream come true

 

By Tigger

©Copyright M.R.H All Rights Reserved®

 


Submitted: March 14, 2013

© Copyright 2022 tiger76rt. All rights reserved.

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

Add Your Comments:

Comments

LyraHydraComa

enjoyed the selection.

Thu, March 14th, 2013 3:40pm

Author
Reply

Thanks

Fri, March 22nd, 2013 3:20am

Sex Kitten

I like this a lot :) In fact, our of your creations, this has to be my favourite. It really paints the picture in the mind. Very innocent poem, uncorrupted by sentimentality, but beautiful nonetheless :)

Mon, March 18th, 2013 12:14pm

Author
Reply

Thanks for all the kind comments:)

Thu, March 21st, 2013 10:12am

tiger76rt

Most kind. And im glad you enjoyed reading it:)
Thank you.

Mon, March 18th, 2013 2:40pm

Freebird Writer

I liked this one. I'm not sure of the message but were trying to say, but I have my own idea. The world is a beautiful place, and I love looking out at the stars of a night time. I would spend all night out there looking at them if I could.

Wed, July 3rd, 2013 12:30pm

Author
Reply

Thank you. Its much appreciated:)

Wed, July 3rd, 2013 5:39am

Facebook Comments

Other Content by tiger76rt

Poem / Poetry

Poem / Poetry