Poem by: tigerlilly17
Submitted: February 22, 2013
I want to run away with you
To a place far from here
Where we can lay underneath the stars
Because all the stars in the sky is how much my love is for you
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To run away? With the one you love? Oh how great that chance would be! I like how you wrote this poem, even if it isn't full of many lines. It has emotion in it, or so I can tell, which I really love about poetry. :)
Now ur talking I would run with you under the stars to see the gleem in your eyes and tell you I love you. Well noit you babe but I love teh simplistic beauty of this and I agree!
I agree with the readers above. Simple goes a long way. This poem carries a drop of talent mixed with young love and it kisses some youthful feeling to an older heart. It took me back twenty years...when I was twenty. I like this piece a ton. The snowman can find a good nostalgic feeling to smile with.
Definantlly like this, simple but heartfelt
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