Bag of Broken Bones

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is an alliteration poem I wrote in my poetry class. Please read and comment! Thnx in advance:P

Have you seen him?


This man that manifests upon

the molestation and mutilation

of the meek mankind.


He walks aroumd,

Whispering to the weak, weary

And worn out souls.


Beckoning the blistered bodies

To burrow into their final bed.


He slowly slithers a soothing song

That lures their soul into eternal sleep.


After the death of the independant individual,

Their body is left desolate and deserted.


He binds the body and adds it

To his bag of broken bones.


Submitted: April 26, 2012

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Ah Tim, though I don't understand the symbolism of this poem, I like it.
Keep writing :)

Sat, May 26th, 2012 8:28am


This poem is an alliteration poem and it symbolizes how death walks around picking up body after body and throwind in a bag. It's basically symbolizing and idea of what death does. Thnx for commenting:P

Fri, July 20th, 2012 2:35pm

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