Better than angels

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Have you thought that you can be better than those angels who fly in the sky...!!
If you haven't....I promise you, after you read will change your mind!


I always asked myself….can I be an angel?!
I know that some people will make fun of it …but think about it…
Why can’t you be an angel…in your own way…
I don’t compare humankind to angels….though I know if I did that…people will definitely say….”Angels are better”….
but why do they have to be better!!
Angels are not perfect…all the time….maybe they can’t sin….but they can’t fall in love neither….
They have wings…we have fears….
They can fly across clouds….we can cry and give the world blessed tears….
They live in heaven….but we can live in hell….and we also can go to heaven….
They can be fallen…and we also can be sinners.
They’re beautiful spirits …and we also have glorious souls…
Most of them are afraid to sin….but most of us aren’t afraid of this…
I’m not saying that our flaws and sins are meritorious…I’m just saying that we can do more than they can do…though if those things are wrong or even right…
Let’s think about it…humankind is better than angels…
Though the wars….though the hate….the lies…cheating…..we still can find love!!
And that’s the only thing …..angels can’t have it!


Submitted: November 05, 2011

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Midnight Jade

True, but some humans can't love either. Yeah but this was a very powerfuyl piece, it makes you think,

Sun, November 6th, 2011 11:49am


You're right about that

Sun, November 6th, 2011 3:50am


very intense and indeed thought provoking.the last 3 lines sum up what you set out to say.
like it.

Mon, November 7th, 2011 12:15pm


Thank you..Glad that you like it

Mon, November 7th, 2011 4:27am


liked it, intresting, Im an angel! :))

Wed, November 9th, 2011 9:05pm


Of course you are....and I'm glad that you liked it!!

Wed, November 9th, 2011 2:33pm


if you have the time, could you see my poem, Angel problems, I think u would like it :)

Wed, November 9th, 2011 9:06pm


Wow, this is great stuff.... you may or may not be right on all accounts but certainly we can give it a lot of thoughts and find truth in research. Excellent!!!!!

Sat, November 12th, 2011 5:06pm

Athena Young

Such a great article! It really makes you think, it especially made me think as I had never thought of angels or humans in that way before. You are a wonderful writer! ^_^ great stuff!

Fri, December 16th, 2011 10:09am

Reply really made my day with this beautiful comment :)

Fri, December 23rd, 2011 3:05am


that was another way to look at it. Angels are better at some things, like being more pious, but never have i heard of angels falling in love. nice thinking.

Mon, January 9th, 2012 7:48pm

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