This how you feel when you get your heart broken and you don't find someone beside you !


Alive with sorrow for one more day that's an accomplishment
You say I'm really ugly, thank you, dear for the compliment
I wish you could feel me with my dead lust
I have a heart, i i have to blow the dust
My life is just a dead queen without crown
I enjoy wearing my tears, as I'm already drown
I'm not perfect as they want me to be
I got a company, a lot of tears as you see
I'm sick of hearing that I'm not what they need
At least can they look at my arms that bleed
They ask me where's your smile...I say I only have my pout
They tell me that tomorrow will be better, but I really doubt
They  wonder why am I too pessimistic
I'm sorry I just love being a little bit realistic
For them love is just a dead cloud flies at blue skies
but for's just a walker in the funreal of angel who dies
Will you leave me alone...I have a pillow which hears my tears
I don't need you to hug me...I love to sleep alone with my own fears
I don't need you to treat me like I'm so pathetic
I'm just writing about my miserable's so poetic
I'm alive in darkness without candles and I'm not afraid
I serve sorrow, as it calls me its favorite maid
I live my favorite nightmares while I'm awake
My reality is just another dream which is fake
I'm alive then dead then alive then's just a tournament 
those were my dead thoughts...I'm sorry for the disappointment

Submitted: November 06, 2011

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Omigod . . . wow. . just wow ! :D that was really good and a bit depressing but still really good :D

Sun, November 6th, 2011 2:26am


Thank you....I'm glad that you're "WOWED" :)

Sat, November 5th, 2011 7:31pm

Christian Taylor

Very sad, but so beautifully written! Brilliant!

Sun, November 6th, 2011 2:32am


Thank you, mate

Sat, November 5th, 2011 7:33pm


Well written and expressive! I like it.

Sun, November 6th, 2011 2:38am


Thank you...I'm glad that you liked it !

Sun, November 6th, 2011 3:47am


Woah. That was so dark! I like your couplet-ey structure!
Beautifully expressed. I really like the "They wonder why I'm so pessimistic/I'm sorry I just like being realistic" lines.
And there's just so much crying D;
It was great!
Thanks for sharing!

Sun, November 6th, 2011 2:56am


Thank you for your really means a lot to me :)

Sun, November 6th, 2011 3:46am

Cherry Kyle

I had a few tears in my eyes.. I've been there before... Loved it.

Sun, November 6th, 2011 3:21am


Aww....I'm glad that you loved it!

Sun, November 6th, 2011 3:45am


The pain is vivid......Wow, this is well written....:)

Sun, November 6th, 2011 9:06am


Thank yooou :)

Sun, November 6th, 2011 3:42am

glitter snow426

very sad, very heartbreaking! You certainly painted a dark cold bitterly sad picture, awesome work indeed! Sometimes sadness can get bigger, a huge storm of no way out. Thank God, there's always a tomorrow of hope to look forward to. This is truly DOWN TO EARTH SORROW

Sun, November 6th, 2011 3:24pm


They wonder why am I too pessimistic
I'm sorry I just love being a little bit realistic

Sun, November 6th, 2011 2:48pm

joi luck

This was really beautiful I can say nothing wrong about it

Sun, November 6th, 2011 5:20pm


Thank you :)

Sun, November 6th, 2011 2:46pm


Yeah, sometimes it´s ok to feel like that. Alone, full of fear and selfdoubt, not knowing what will come, not even knowing what to desire anymore, not knowing shit. That makes us human. That makes us stronger. But no matter what, you are you. Only you can see the your world with your eyes, noone else. You are the center of the universe in which the most importannt person is YOU. Your soul exists, only this body youßve chosen in this life for whatever reason, was born and will die, but the real you will never end existing. So all those people that are hurting us, leaving us, loving us, etc. are just soulfriends who are helping us to learn something in this life. A friend of mine once told me: Imagine you are locked up in a jailcell with a huge gorilla who will rape you from behind. You´ll have two choices. You´ll either fight against it and you´ll get hurt, or you´ll just relax and enjoy. Brutal example but it shows the point. That´s just life.
By the way. I really like this poem of yours. Keep writing, keep posting, keep fighting. G-man

Sun, November 6th, 2011 6:55pm

Reply really touched my heart with these words....and I love your true...and it changed me by the way!!

Sun, November 6th, 2011 2:45pm

Richard Staschy

A nicely made poem, its depressing but that's the intent... Good stuff!

Sun, November 6th, 2011 8:26pm


Thank you!

Sun, November 6th, 2011 2:41pm


There's a beauty in this sadness. You create a really vivid picture with your writing, and you really seem to be able to put a lot of passion into your writing. Again, like your fallen angel poem, it's very angsty, and even though the emotions are so similar, you create entirely different sounds with your words. I like this, It's full of feeling :)

Sun, November 6th, 2011 11:44pm

Reply really made my evening with your comment...
really thanks, sweetheart :)

Sun, November 6th, 2011 3:48pm


Wow I was truly blown away this is a great poem scratch that a magnificent poem

Mon, November 7th, 2011 12:05am


Wow...this comment really means a lot..thank you! :)

Sun, November 6th, 2011 4:06pm


Great poem! It was really good. Good but sad and tragic.

Mon, November 7th, 2011 12:25am


Thanks :)

Sun, November 6th, 2011 4:30pm

Hey There Lilah

honestly, i sortve fell as if i can relate but in a few parts i don't. it was absolutely excellent. i loved it...

Mon, November 7th, 2011 12:33am


:) I'm glad that you loved it :)

Sun, November 6th, 2011 4:52pm


Well, first off,,,absolutly AMAZING! Second, beautiful and well written.!!!!!!

Mon, November 7th, 2011 2:22am


Haha...thank you, my friend :)

Sun, November 6th, 2011 6:34pm


So heart whelmingXO

Mon, November 7th, 2011 3:57am


:) yeah i glad that u liked it

Sun, November 6th, 2011 8:04pm

Lucy Lucy

I got your reading request and I am sorry .. I am a bit late in reading it.. was bit busy... but I got to tell you this is absolutely A-M-A-Z-I-N-G... Very nicely rhymed and words flew like water... Very good.

Mon, November 7th, 2011 5:59am


Thank you, darling :)
I'm glad that you liked it

Mon, November 7th, 2011 4:26am


This poem is very relate-able and each line is perfectly described with emotive language. I love it! Keep writing, okay?


Mon, November 7th, 2011 8:02am


Okay...I promise :)...and I'm really glad that you liked it :)

Mon, November 7th, 2011 4:35am

Lucy Sahara xoxoxo

Great job:) Again, no other words to expresses the meaning of pain...

Mon, November 7th, 2011 12:41pm


Sweetheart, you're leaving me speechless again...
I'm really proud to have a great friend like you!

Mon, November 7th, 2011 4:43am

Hawkeye Jones

That was very good! I've been there so amany times, and you captured those emotions perfectly. Good work!

Tue, November 8th, 2011 4:42am


Thank you, I'm glad that you liked it!

Tue, November 8th, 2011 3:23am

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