Dead Diaries

PrincessD97

Omigod . . . wow. . just wow ! :D that was really good and a bit depressing but still really good :D

Christian Taylor

Very sad, but so beautifully written! Brilliant!

mdh7

Well written and expressive! I like it.

smileyfication

Woah. That was so dark! I like your couplet-ey structure!
Beautifully expressed. I really like the "They wonder why I'm so pessimistic/I'm sorry I just like being realistic" lines.
And there's just so much crying D;
It was great!
Thanks for sharing!

Cherry Kyle

I had a few tears in my eyes.. I've been there before... Loved it.

Intifar2210

The pain is vivid......Wow, this is well written....:)

glitter snow426

very sad, very heartbreaking! You certainly painted a dark cold bitterly sad picture, awesome work indeed! Sometimes sadness can get bigger, a huge storm of no way out. Thank God, there's always a tomorrow of hope to look forward to. This is truly DOWN TO EARTH SORROW

joi luck

This was really beautiful I can say nothing wrong about it

sowosamma25

Yeah, sometimes it´s ok to feel like that. Alone, full of fear and selfdoubt, not knowing what will come, not even knowing what to desire anymore, not knowing shit. That makes us human. That makes us stronger. But no matter what, you are you. Only you can see the your world with your eyes, noone else. You are the center of the universe in which the most importannt person is YOU. Your soul exists, only this body youßve chosen in this life for whatever reason, was born and will die, but the real you will never end existing. So all those people that are hurting us, leaving us, loving us, etc. are just soulfriends who are helping us to learn something in this life. A friend of mine once told me: Imagine you are locked up in a jailcell with a huge gorilla who will rape you from behind. You´ll have two choices. You´ll either fight against it and you´ll get hurt, or you´ll just relax and enjoy. Brutal example but it shows the point. That´s just life.
By the way. I really like this poem of yours. Keep writing, keep posting, keep fighting. G-man

Richard Staschy

A nicely made poem, its depressing but that's the intent... Good stuff!

BlackWind

There's a beauty in this sadness. You create a really vivid picture with your writing, and you really seem to be able to put a lot of passion into your writing. Again, like your fallen angel poem, it's very angsty, and even though the emotions are so similar, you create entirely different sounds with your words. I like this, It's full of feeling :)

youinspireme

Wow I was truly blown away this is a great poem scratch that a magnificent poem

Addictedtobooks

Great poem! It was really good. Good but sad and tragic.

Hey There Lilah

honestly, i sortve fell as if i can relate but in a few parts i don't. it was absolutely excellent. i loved it...

Beden

Well, first off,,,absolutly AMAZING! Second, beautiful and well written.!!!!!!

AlyssonLuv

So heart whelmingXO

Lucy Lucy

I got your reading request and I am sorry .. I am a bit late in reading it.. was bit busy... but I got to tell you this is absolutely A-M-A-Z-I-N-G... Very nicely rhymed and words flew like water... Very good.

Fascinating

This poem is very relate-able and each line is perfectly described with emotive language. I love it! Keep writing, okay?

~Fascinating~

Lucy Sahara xoxoxo

Great job:) Again, no other words to expresses the meaning of pain...

Hawkeye Jones

That was very good! I've been there so amany times, and you captured those emotions perfectly. Good work!