Fear your fears!

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Release your fears and break all the chains..!!

Have you ever tried to face your fears...don't tell me that you did...because you were just facing the idea of having a fear..

If you fear high places, then standing on the roof of a high building doesn't mean you face your fears....you only fear dying if you fall...if you want to face this fear...then you only have to jump!! believe that no one will catch you...it's only you, your fear and your fate!! Jump...and fly...you're not falling...you're flying....the ground is getting closer....just close your eyes....and get ready to the hit.

If you fear darkness...then staying in a dark room doesn't mean that you face it...if you really want to face darkness...so don't think of candles...forget about the light....open your blinded eyes...and get ready to see your fears smiling....! Open your heart and get ready...for the shock!! You can't see anything...but they can see you..! You're in the middle of your fears...so enjoy this...your eyes are closed though they're wide opened....you stare....you beware....you're waiting....you know that they'll appear....at any moment....they'll come to you...with a candle so you can see only their dead faces...just keep waiting.

If you wanna face your fear of death...then DIE....go to your own hell...and get back..! You can die...and your heart will still beat...just live...your death..! If you really wanna face that fear...then open your arms for death...and hug it....taste the cold lips of death...and give it a kiss...for immortality!! Touch its cold hands....their no blood in its veins...only blood in your eyes....can you feel its burning breaths...you're listening to a beautiful symphony...your last symphony...so enjoy this dance....take the death from its hands...it's a beautiful princess....nothing on her face but black eyes, and dead lips....dance your last dance with death....angels will play you a symphony....you're dancing with death....you're spending your last moments...you dance and dance...but you can't smile....you forgot what a smile means after one look in its eyes....you're so cold....you start to breathe hardly.....and it's there....looking at you..silently....you fall on your knees....at her feet....you start to sweat....your body is shaking from the inside......your soul is starting to leave your body....you hold your chest....your heart is beating fast....you look in its eyes...one last look....and then....your heart stops beating.

Your fears live in your mind, because your heart is too weak to carry them...your eyes can't hide what goes in your heart...your trembling hands...tell a lot about you....

Fear is just a miserable way to hide your weakness......you're not afraid....you're just weak....you're only afraid....to face your fears.

Submitted: January 28, 2012

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cmore

Wow, an amazing new approach to pretty much all our fears. I mean, wow! Beautiful work! Let me know of any more please? Thanks?

Sat, January 28th, 2012 2:57am

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Thank you, I'm glad that you liked it :)

Sat, January 28th, 2012 3:23am

IAMMYOWNFATE

WOW, I LOVE IT! I AM AT A LOSS OF WORDS SO I REALLY CAN'T DESCRIBE HOW AWESOME IT IS.

Sat, January 28th, 2012 3:03am

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Wow..thanks a lot!! I really appreciate it :)

Sat, January 28th, 2012 3:21am

GigattGirl

Loved it all especially the last paragraph...it was both emotional and stripped of emotion at the same time. I think this writing would be even better if you didn't end it with so much exclamation point but that's just my opinion. Overall loved it so keep them coming. ;)

Sat, January 28th, 2012 3:20am

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thank you...and yeah i know...i was just too...emotional when i wrote it...that's why there are so much exclamation points :)

Sat, January 28th, 2012 3:17am

SmileValentine

omg! what a fear xD
haha..to be honest, im afraid og both darkness and high places..and the most fearful thing that i fear of, is a dog xD (what a shame)
im not afraid of dying..it's a natural phenomenon although it's a painful process..
nice writing! i love the ideas.. :)

Sat, January 28th, 2012 3:23am

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Lol, thank you :)..and yeah i know...many people fear dogs! :)

Sat, January 28th, 2012 3:13am

the dead poet

this is a really great poem, about facing your inner fears, I liked it you kept structure throughout this poem, really a good poem

Sat, January 28th, 2012 7:01am

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Thanks a lot...I'm glad that you liked it

Sat, January 28th, 2012 3:11am

joi luck

wow this was really powerful I love the emotion you put into it. This is another great poem from you but just a suggestion you don't really need the exclamation points even though it doesn't take away from your peice it distracts a little

Sat, January 28th, 2012 7:20am

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Thank you, and of course...I will take with your advice :)

Sat, January 28th, 2012 3:09am

JaneMarshall

phobia is developed by ones own heart itself with ones own wish but u can be overcomed by your will to fight it good 1

Sat, January 28th, 2012 8:15am

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I agree with you...but phobia is also developed by ones own weak mind!! your mind also control your fears, not only your heart

Sat, January 28th, 2012 3:06am

fresh spirits

Hi I am sorry to tell this but I must.First the idea is so well written but it is not a verse writing do not you think do?!I t goes under a memoir rather than poetry.But any way it is good.

Sat, January 28th, 2012 11:15am

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well i guess you're right! and thanks anyway

Sat, January 28th, 2012 3:20am