Poem by: Tinas words
bush, war, terror, poem, haiku, oil
Submitted: December 28, 2007
Modern day crusade
a huge greed for oil
Who next to invade?
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Not only the original 5-7-5 syllable format but with a triple rhyme as well!!! Very impressive!!!
Yeh wasn't easy but I guess that's the point.
The pithiest commenst are always the hardest to construct. Well done, and to the point.
Took a few practices, and the demolishion of a a few unrequired brain cells. Thanks.
well constructed words
fall like snow on the white house
they pray for silence
Very good, like it.
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