Poem by: Tinas words
poetry, poem, haiku
Submitted: February 12, 2008
Her deep red lips call
Requesting some attention
My response a kiss
© Copyright 2016 Tinas words. All rights reserved.
My contribution to the valentine mood.
This piece is very sensual and says a lot in so few words. The art of the Haiku is rarely done as well as this one is. The picture is also very appropriately paired- well written.
Many thanks, love the pic also.
very, very nice! Sensual and seductive culminating in 'the kiss' Great Haiku!!!!.....Jerry
That is a massive compliment from you.
Very unique. Love the choice of words!
Well done! There seems to be so much artistry and emotion conveyed through so few words.
Many thanks, and happy valentines day to you.
Oh that's very nice Phillip! great feel in this one...katie
Thanks, they are difficult to bend in to shape, but that's half the fun.
Experiencing other login problems? We can help.