Hollow Grave

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

Its my First Poem?

I break what cant be broken.
I cry Blood Tears at night.
Im looking for something to hold on to.
Shaking with Fear and Fright.
You tell me that you love me.
But things begin to Fade.
Turns out that im lonely.
In My Shallow Grave.


Submitted: September 09, 2009

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SLJONES

wow really good for your first one loved it well done and keep up the good writing sj

Wed, September 9th, 2009 12:36pm

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Well thank yo Very much

Wed, September 9th, 2009 2:29pm

tastetheblood

Very good for your first short and simple but it gets the point across

Sat, September 12th, 2009 3:01am

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Well thanks

Fri, September 11th, 2009 8:03pm

NazireC

Short and precise. Excellent

Thu, September 24th, 2009 11:00am

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Thank you Very Much

Thu, September 24th, 2009 4:34am

Naomi Taylor

i love this one! this one is really awesome i like the rhyming in it this is perfect ???

Thu, September 24th, 2009 8:47pm

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Thank you ounce again.

Thu, September 24th, 2009 1:54pm

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