Poem by: to lie on the floor without holding on
moon, sky, stars
Submitted: December 24, 2009
Transcend from his eyes
Into that black sky
To find your own stars
While I look up
From the earth
Smiling at you
You’ve gone so far
To the moon
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I absolutely love it..... and I promise if I didn't I proably wouldn't be comenting so its the truth its now like oe of my faves
Dear, thank you. This means so much (:
I like it so much. its a very good poem.
Thank you! (:
Though I didn't understand it, (Not your fault :)) I really think it's great. And the title fits it perfectly. :D
I realized that after the fact of publishing it that it probably doesn't make as much sense as it could ^^; But thank you so much!
I love the title, and its a nice poem. :D
Thank you! :D
it's nice and short and sweet. i love it! :)
Your approval makes this poem so much better ^^
This is good.Very sweet and deep; I like it.(;
Thank you :D
Great poem, I wish it was a little longer but it was very sweet!
Yeah, I'm regretting the length a tad. But thank you!
well done i liked it :)
Great poem, as most of yours are...if I can be half as good as you at writing poems I'll be happy! I just cant seem to get enough of them.
I seriously doubt they are that good! Dear, I appreciate the comments so much :D Thank you.
Enjoyed the poem and the first line is particularly good.
Thanks for sharing
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