Her voice unheard
WITH LOVE
her soul so pure
who she is isnt absourd.
As the moon rises
she does as well
but as the moon goes down
her mine subsides.
Her form so elegant and new
just as the ocean,
a deep blue.
Her mind set right
and her goals at a drift
As teh days go by she will progress.
WITH LOVE,
The MoonGoddess
Submitted: January 01, 2008
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Comments
I liked it.
Tue, January 1st, 2008 8:57pm
This is beautiful, I wonder what you would write about venus??
Tue, January 1st, 2008 9:15pm
You got a lot of raw talent there, man. This is a great poem. I look forward to seeing more of your work...
Wed, January 2nd, 2008 2:24amFacebook Comments
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You have an intresting way of saying things...and a lot of potential to become a great poet,just some spelling mishaps. Thankyou very much for posting this, it seems to calm the mind :)
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