WITH LOVE , (a fantasy)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

This poem is about a
fantasy icon. It descibes
and solitifies who this icon is
and how she is built up, for she
isnt a building, nor human, but nor
monster. Who she is is hidden untill
the end......

Her voice unheard






her soul so pure

who she is isnt absourd.

As the moon rises

she does as well

but as the moon goes down

her mine subsides.

Her form so elegant and new

just as the ocean,

a deep blue.

Her mind set right

and her goals at a drift

As teh days go by she will progress.


The MoonGoddess

Submitted: January 01, 2008

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You have an intresting way of saying things...and a lot of potential to become a great poet,just some spelling mishaps. Thankyou very much for posting this, it seems to calm the mind :)

Tue, January 1st, 2008 8:36pm


I liked it.

Tue, January 1st, 2008 8:57pm


This is beautiful, I wonder what you would write about venus??

Tue, January 1st, 2008 9:15pm


You got a lot of raw talent there, man. This is a great poem. I look forward to seeing more of your work...

Wed, January 2nd, 2008 2:24am

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