Facts about Her

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic


A guy tries to write down all the facts about a girl he is crushing on...

Submitted: October 09, 2017

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“Facts about Her”

 

 

He really thought

he knew her

pretty well

I mean he

knew her

but then again

did he,

this threw him

he knew her

birthday

and lots more

odd

and personal facts

so I guess

he

felt like he

knew her,

he decided to

write down

every little fact

he could think of

about her

his list started

with a well known

fact about her

her birthday was

January 28th

a pretty straight

forward start

but then

as he begun

to think about

her

he wandered off

point

he went from

facts

to features

starting with her

eyes,

he found he

couldn’t just put

green

as their color

to be factual

he felt

he had to explain

they weren’t just

green

or even

blue-green

he went on for

a full page

describing how

they were

green-blue

being that they

were mostly green

with some blue

that’s why you

had to say green

first

whenever you

described them,

he then went on

to describe the

flakes of color

she had in her

iris

for a good

couple of pages

and that’s before

he even got going

on how her

eyes

reflect different

types of light

in totally

unique ways

creating a new

palette of color

for each one

as if they had

a will of their

own

and how he

would swear

in certain settings

they even got

bigger

brighter

and would

sparkle

giving her

the look

of a heroine

in some cutting

edge

Japanese anime

graphic novel,

after about

an hour

of some real

hard writing

he was ready to

slide down to

her smile

which he decides

that to be

done correctly

he needs to

break her

smile into

separate

categories

such as

happy

sexy

fake

mad

innocent

and nineteen

others

but even then

he had

sub-categories

with numerous

combinations of

the previous

types of

smiles

all of this was

neatly documented

in a 100-page

composition notebook

with just

“Facts about Her”

written on the

front of it,

after countless

pages of

smiles

and smile

combinations

he was ready

for a new chapter

this one entitled

“Her Mouth”

which he spent

the first two pages

just explaining

the differences

between the

“Her Smile”

chapter

and the

“Her Mouth”

chapter,

he spent

the next

nine hours

filling up

every page

both front and

back

of that notebook

going on to

describe

every line and

curve of her

visible body

and when he

was done

he sat back

in his beat-up

reclining chair

with a prideful

feeling of

accomplishment

and as he was

thinking about

his book

“Facts about Her”

that was when

he realized

he was wrong

it wasn’t her

birthday

on January 28th

that was his sister’s

birthday

he reached over

to the table

and grabbed a

black magic marker

and ran it

through

the word “Facts”

in the title

ok

he said to himself

maybe I don’t

know

as many facts

about her as

I thought

but I can say

with confidence

anyone who reads

this book

“About Her”

will feel like

they had already

met her

from the very

first time

they look

in to her

beautiful

green/blue

eyes…

 

Tom Allen…10-05-2017…

 

 

 


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