Ringo's yellow submarine

Crashed into the ocean floor,

When will Jim

Break through the nautical doors?

Submitted: September 24, 2019

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Vance Currie

Sometimes I have nothing to say. This is one of those times. But that is a lie, Tom, because I just said something. As for the poem, I am sure there is a rational answer but I can't figure out who Jim is. Perhaps he will jimmy the doors open.

Tue, September 24th, 2019 8:58pm


You don't remember " The Doors " Joe? you must be younger than me, or slept through Jim Morrison's death! Thanks for reading.

Tue, September 24th, 2019 5:39pm

Vance Currie

Sorry, Tom. I was getting confused with Jim Pansy who shared an enclosure with me at the zoo some years ago. Or it might have been Jim Nastics. Too many Jims for me to remember them all.

Wed, September 25th, 2019 11:17pm


Sounds like a case of the Jim Jams Joe, if you'll excuse the humour! When were you released from the zoo?

Wed, September 25th, 2019 4:52pm

Vance Currie

The moment they unlocked my cage.

Thu, September 26th, 2019 10:07am


Well Joe I'm glad you're enjoying your freedom. Stay well clear of the shrinks!

Thu, September 26th, 2019 5:51am

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