As the Rain Falls Down My Face

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

how I got over him

That clear blue sky that was once beautiful now turned into something nasty and ugly. He left me, and as a result, that beautiful meadow that I call my mind turned stormy. The wind swirled, the sun hidden by the clouds. My mind soon turned into reality, and as my dark blue eyes looked up at the clouds, they began to water. The sky mimicked me, and began to let a few raindrops fall. My very last memory of him was him stomping on my heart, forcing it to stop beating and causing it to never be able to love again. The rain increased as did my tears, pouring down my face, all for him. He was so perfect and flawless, why did he have to hurt me like this? Was I not perfect enough for him? The earth disagreed. Thunder and lightning began, lighting up the clouds and rumbling the earth. I fell down, straight onto my back, not in fear but in dim curiousity, wondering if this was meer chance or if someone was really listening to me, and responding. No matter how much I wanted to leave this earth I couldn't help but lay there on the wet grass and just let the raindrops cool off my body, my mouth wide open, catching the water. I giggled. Maybe someone did care. Maybe someone was actually listening. My heart felt alive again. I held my hand to my chest and felt it beating rapidly, making me smile. The clouds began to clear, as did the wind, there was no more, my very last thought before the clouds disappeared from my mind and reality was, "Getting your heart broken is a way of letting you know that you have one..."

- Ciara <3

please comment I would love your feedback on how I can make my writing better


Submitted: March 16, 2012

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