My Love That Escaped

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Just got through a breakup, my emotions just kinda spilled out onto the paper.

The sleepless nights,

the tears I cried,

all I'm able to do,

is stop and think,

if all of this is worth it,

I love you,

and for what?

what is the reason for loving you?

if the only outcomes are pain and agony?

These cuts on my arms are for you,

My heart is for you,

my body,

my mind,

my soul,

was all for you,

you took my heart and crushed it,

you took my body and used it,

you invaded my mind,

and threw away my soul.

- Ciara <3

please comment I would love your feedback on how I can make my writing better

Submitted: March 15, 2012

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Brian W

But you have survived stronger and wiser...It is a question many should ask...Is all the pain of heartbreak worth me taking a chance and loving again....A good poem well written

Thu, March 15th, 2012 7:40am


thank you so much! :)

Thu, March 15th, 2012 12:49am

Ice Winifr3d

It's tough going through a breakup, but it's a good experience for you despite all the heartache and tears because it'll make you a stronger, better person and it won't hurt as much when or if you go through it again. I can feel your emotions in this one so good work and I hope you're doing alright.

Sat, March 17th, 2012 5:30am


Im doing better thanks!(: and thank you so much for your feedback, it really helps me! :)
- Ciara

Fri, March 16th, 2012 10:35pm

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