That Certain Lust

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

A girl named Blaire meets her fate, a vampire named Vince.

I could feel my heart pounding in my chest. How could a moment so perfect, so right, turn into pain? I turned my head back, he was still following me....I dodged tree after tree, my legs moving as fast as they possible could. I needed to get away. He followed, of course, him being faster than I was. A mortal human could never escape the fate that was a bloodsucker. It was so dark, the only thing I was able to hear was my heavy breathing as I sped through that forest. It was a full moon tonight. All of the stars were out. At that moment, I stopped immediately, hearing the waves of the ocean, looking down and having a sense of panic knowing I was just on the edge of a cliff that descended into the ocean. The waves churned and crushed against the base of the rocks, I knew there was no escape now. I turned around, there was no one in sight....

"Hello, Blaire. Did you really think you could outrun me?"

The voice came from my right. I turned immediately toward it, knowing it was his voice. The voice of my beloved Vince.

A tap on my shoulder. I spun around, only to come face to face with the perfection that was Vince. He grabbed my hand, stroking it lightly, then he bent down to kiss it, his eyes never leaving mine. His blood red eyes. His lips were so soft, I could have been swept off my feet if I knew I hadn't met my fate.

His arms then wrapped themselves around me. The glow from his eyes drew me in. His whole complexion just blinded me. He was like an angel. An angel sent straight from hell.

I breathed slowly, not wanting to make any sudden moves. Then, he did something unexpected. He leaned in toward me and kissed my lips.

I was taken aback, my knees grew weak. Vince had to hold me up. Then, just like that, he bent my head back and moved his mouth to my neck. A sharp pain aroused when he inserted his teeth into my skin, the pain then spreading throughout my body. I knew it was all over then.

- Ciara <3

please comment I would love your feedback on how I can make my writing better


Submitted: March 15, 2012

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hotstory4you

nice and short, I like it

Thu, March 15th, 2012 11:35am

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thank you! :)

Thu, March 15th, 2012 1:04pm

RyansGirlFOREVER1993

I loved it!

Thu, March 22nd, 2012 7:04pm

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aw, thanks! :D
- Ciara

Thu, March 22nd, 2012 12:27pm

Thankyou001

OMG..Is there anymore to this ?...this is sooo good i want to make mines just like that!..good (:

Wed, April 11th, 2012 2:19am

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awwww thanks!!!! im working on the next part of this(: good luck with your writing!!

Tue, April 10th, 2012 11:21pm

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