That Certain Lust: Part 2

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Vince and Blaire are back again!

  His fangs were in my neck. The pain was unbearable, it spread through my body like an electric shock. Once I was zapped I crippled to the ground, blood squirting out of my neck onto the cool damp grass. Vince stood over me as if he were protecting me, when in reality he was the real danger.

  I looked up at him. How could he do this to me? His bright red eyes, glowing in the moonlight, pierced into my soul. I couldn't look away. The pain seemed to disappear from my body when I made eye contact with my love. His shaggy brown hair flowing with the wind, it seemed so unreal. I reached one hand up toward him but he kicked it away, and I flinched in pain. My blood dripped from his teeth and down his jawline, and he licked his lips. I could still feel the blood being drained from me, and my surroundings were getting blurrier by the second. Soon his face was blurred, and all I could hear was him whimpering. My eyes shut, and everything went black.

  I awoke on a white bed, with people surrounding me, all wearing white cloaks and those things that cover your mouth when you are at the doctor. I laughed, then cringed back in pain. The memory of those greenish-blue things that cover your mouth made me happy. It reminded me of my mother, the one time she took me to the doctor and drew a mouth on one of them, then putting it on her and making funny noises. I groaned, the people in white were making the pain worse. They poked me with small needles, injecting some sort of fluid I couldn't make out. They stopped only for a moment to stick one more needle in me, then continued wheeling the bed into a room. There was a bright light where they had stopped the bed, I kept my eyes focused on it. Again I passed out.

  I woke up coughing and gasping for breath. My neck was in so much pain, I reached up and tried to touch it.

  "Ouch!" There was a needle in my arm, putting fluid into me.

  I heard a cough.

  My eyes darted to wear the sound came from, and in the corner of the room, wearing a long black jacket and jeans, was my beloved Vince. Red stains were on his jawline.

Submitted: April 11, 2012

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It's pretty good. I liked it, although I would have enjoyed to know more about the setting of the first part of the story but then again, it is "Part 2"..anyways, good read. You're pretty solid, keep it up :]

Thu, April 19th, 2012 4:45am


thanks!! :D :D

Thu, April 19th, 2012 10:36pm

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