A Little Funn; But its REAL'TALK.

My Heart Needs A Bandage,
And Some Glue Too,
And Maybe A Needle And Thread,
To Help Get Me Through,

i May Also Need  Cloth,
To Wipe Away The Blood,
Because You Never Kept it Safe,
Like You Said You Would,

And Maybe For My Birthday,
You Can Buy Me A Box Of Tissues,
Cus' i Doubt in 5 Months Time,
That i Wont Still Miss You,

its Funny How The People,
Who Said They Wouldnt Hurt You,
Are Always The Ones That Do;
Prime Example Of You,

But What Hurts Most,
is That You Said You Never Lie,
But if You Truly Loved Me,
iWouldnt Be Hurting Now, Right?




Submitted: April 20, 2010

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MyaBaybeii

this is really nice, i like the concept and the whole idea.
i see a few tweaks would make it even better though. the last two stanza`s seem to be out of rhythem to the otherss, see wah i mean bekkah. tweak a few words and youl be there. its nearlyy perfecttt xD lemme knoo when/if you tweakk nn ill have another peep

Wed, April 21st, 2010 12:33am

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iJust Realised How To Reply On This O_o
Readd Previous Commentt :P xx

Thu, April 22nd, 2010 12:17pm

Brian W

We protect ourselves from being hurt by people but we open our hearts to the one we trust and that is why it seems they are the ones that always hurt us.....Nice poem and well written.....

Wed, April 27th, 2011 9:35pm

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Thankyou so much.
I guess, i'll have to learn to not open my heart to anyone, no matter how much I love them.

Sun, May 1st, 2011 12:00pm

Lisa Ayers

I enjoyed your writing style here. You portrayed hurt in a fun cute way. I have never seen that done before, bravo!

This poem is relatable. Sorry you endured heartache. I know it's difficult and hard to open your heart again. But I think you miss out on so much more but shutting others out.

We all have a common need and that is to be loved.

Great poem

Thu, February 28th, 2013 1:02pm

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Thank you! I do try and make the best out of bad situations in reality, so this time it's obviously shown in my poem! Thankfull ynow, I am loved by an amazing person, for who i am!
i guess we all need a little heartache before meeting the right person.

Thank you again

Tue, March 5th, 2013 2:30am

Lisa Ayers

Glad you found someone. Good for you, hug

Wed, March 6th, 2013 5:42am

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thanks

Thu, March 7th, 2013 2:08am

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