My heart has been shattered, my walls are being repaired.
I'll build the fort stronger so that you'll no longer get in.
This is my blood, this is my body, no longer your temple.
Find your worship elsewhere .
Isolation covered the snowstorm,as bitterness solaces my heart.
These storm of swords obliterated your houses of daggers.
My army defeated the beasts within.
My crown encased in ice ,touch it I dare.
My venom treacherous as dragons flames,drink and beware.
Your pretty poison covered in ribbons and lace.
Your rejection one tragic disgrace.
Visages smitten with evil,how it was all your choice.
This is my soul, this is my darkness,no longer your salvation.
A guidance against the beams of radiant light.
Your torment, your everlasting plague.
In the end you are left alone, to serve the shame.
Submitted: November 21, 2008
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That is one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read.
Fear of rejection, reaction to rejection, the shattering of self-esteem....After the first heart break, we build our fortresses, for we are too scared to suffer more.
Fate x
You have my I like it vote, though it really should be I love it (:
You have this amazing epic style, reminiscent of the old classics, full of wonderful imagery and emotion. Really enjoyed this.
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AryaAliceLuna
That was awesome.
Wed, August 12th, 2009 6:21pmAuthor
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Thank you! Feel free to read more..
Wed, August 12th, 2009 11:31am