Iced Hearts

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This was a moment of female rage..

 
 Iced Hearts 12/30/2005
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My heart has been shattered, my walls are being repaired. 

I'll build the fort stronger so that you'll no longer get in.

This is my blood, this is my body, no longer your temple. 

Find your worship elsewhere .

Isolation covered the snowstorm,as bitterness solaces my heart.

These storm of swords obliterated your houses of daggers.

 My army defeated the beasts within.

 My crown encased in ice ,touch it I dare.

My venom treacherous as dragons flames,drink and beware. 

Your pretty poison covered in ribbons and lace.

 Your rejection one tragic disgrace. 

Visages smitten with evil,how it was all your choice. 

 This is my soul, this is my darkness,no longer your salvation.

A guidance against the beams of radiant light.

Your torment, your everlasting plague.

In the end you are left alone, to serve the shame.

 
©2005 Tragedienne Belle Morte
 
 


Submitted: November 21, 2008

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AryaAliceLuna

That was awesome.

Wed, August 12th, 2009 6:21pm

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Thank you! Feel free to read more..

Wed, August 12th, 2009 11:31am

walkingonfate

That is one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read.
Fear of rejection, reaction to rejection, the shattering of self-esteem....After the first heart break, we build our fortresses, for we are too scared to suffer more.

Fate x

You have my I like it vote, though it really should be I love it (:

Fri, December 18th, 2009 7:29pm

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Thank you very much, your words sre truly appreciated..

I look forward to more correspondence :)

Wed, January 6th, 2010 1:50pm

bobthebuilder

You have this amazing epic style, reminiscent of the old classics, full of wonderful imagery and emotion. Really enjoyed this.

Thu, September 5th, 2013 1:30am

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You always humble me with your gracious words. Thank you again!

Wed, September 4th, 2013 9:39pm

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