"When"

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is an older poem, I'm trying to recapture my muse again. Comments always appreciated~!

When 10/25/2005 ------------------- Where Twilight dwells so do the sins of thy Beloved. Within this gothic sanctuary, haunted by memories Gatekeeper. Dark clouds raining beneath a perfect sky. While Maidens danced under the eclipsed sun. This hell be made by Temptation's wroth, under the masque of perfect heaven. Lamenting softly as the Nighttime birds gather. Worthy of every moment that is caused by reverie. While the Ice Queen sheds her feathered crystal tears. Return to Life the dream that was swept away by the Sea. Lovelorn is the Harper who loved the Maid, with every poisoned breath. Silence forcing more silent pain, the devil inside pushing away sister nightfall. ©2005 Tragedienne BelleMorte


Submitted: August 25, 2009

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Manyfacets

This is great! your work feeds my curiosity,
I've been more interested in good poetry since
meeting your work. I found the The Raven it's
one of my favs now! Reading up on all the old
famous poets, are you familiar with James Graham
Marquis of Montrose? I love his poem "My dear and
Only Love" 1612-1650. enough said M.

Tue, August 25th, 2009 12:05pm

madaGDarko

This really good The choice of word are amazing. I only negative thing is the structure of your poem aside that, it's very well written . Please drop by my page and read the new poem that i wrote, 'Perception of the Unknown'. It's sort of a challenge so please let me know what you think of it. thank you.

Mon, November 30th, 2009 7:45pm

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Thank you for your kind words.

Wed, December 2nd, 2009 9:44pm

Graeme Montrose

Wonderful I love the way you bring a person into another realm within your words

Fri, March 26th, 2010 1:50pm

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Thank you!

Sun, May 30th, 2010 2:02am

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