The Dark War Series, Book One

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Status: Finished | Genre: Fantasy | House: Booksie Classic

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The King of darkness, Pairai, has been quiet for over two thousand years. Now, during the time of great peace, things begin to stir in the dark lands of Opekor, and it is known that he plans to wage war on all the lands of Numenora.
Will the grand alliance once again join forces to battle the great evil?

Fantasy fantasy war evil elves battle dwarves dragons

Chapter 1 (ver.1)

The Dark War Series, Book One

Submitted: December 29, 2007

Chapter 2 (ver.1)

Submitted: January 04, 2008

Author’s note: one league=three miles It was well into the evening when they finally reached the camp, where they found all of the ... Read Chapter

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Mon, April 21st, 2008 3:19pm

These two chapters are fabulous!!! I hope to see more SOON??? You should use your talents for good though...not the dark side. lol Keep up the wonderful writings.

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Fri, May 2nd, 2008 6:46pm

lol.... thanx......... Yeah I wrote those sometime back in late 2007 so I doubt if I will have the next chapter posted anytime soon...... but I will keep chipping away at it like I have been..... I just need time, thats all....

almostlonewolf

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Mon, January 7th, 2008 5:49pm

Awesome. You made the wall easy to visual from the readers perceptive, very well done. Keep writing.

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Mon, January 7th, 2008 7:45pm

thanks... Definitely gonna keep writing...

Firestar

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Sat, January 5th, 2008 3:01pm

That was amazing! How do you think of all those interesting names. They really add to the story. I cannot wait for chapter three.

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Sun, January 6th, 2008 4:05pm

Thanks... As far as making up the names goes, I just put random letters together and called it good... lol... Chapter 3 is on the way...

kittyebony13

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Thu, January 3rd, 2008 1:49pm

Hey, neat beginning! I can't wait to see what happens next. Can you update soon so I can learn some more about this place? It kind of reminds me of a part in my novel, but I haven't put that up on here yet.... Good job!

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Thu, January 3rd, 2008 5:22pm

Thanks... Yeah, chapter 2 is just about done... not much time to type with school and all, but I find time here and there to work on it...

Firestar

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Tue, January 1st, 2008 6:04pm

I loved it. The beginning was captivating and I hung on to every word. Thanks for the suggestion to read your work. Perhaps you could take a look at my novel sometime?

I cannot wait for more!

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Tue, January 1st, 2008 6:20pm

thanks... i will definitely look at your novel when i get the chance...

Aryanne

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Mon, December 31st, 2007 5:11am

WOW this is awesome :)
I'm also a fantasy writer but this is so full of action that I really loved it. I'll be looking forward to reading the next chapter, and come and look at mine?

Aryanne

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Mon, December 31st, 2007 11:18am

Thanks. I have the next chapter up in another window right now and I am just typing away at it... I will definitely look at yours for sure...like, right now...

almostlonewolf

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Sun, December 30th, 2007 7:46pm

Love it write more soon

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Sun, December 30th, 2007 10:42pm

thanks. im working on it as fast as i can. I have it all written in notebooks... just working on putting it into word...