Left unloved

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is a story is about a person who is inlove with someone but they are not inlove with them.

Not about me but i wrote this for all those who are in similar situations.

XXX Treshawna XXX

Music to my ear is the voice I fear

Your unpleasant loveliness is to me despair

Your astonishing beauty I no longer can bear

This tragedy captures my soul and

Stolen my heart and forever shall it be caged

You are like the seasons as they change

As cold as a winter’s day

as strong as the wind blows

And as deceiving as the ocean flows

As endless as a battle with my foes

And as hopeless as ones mind goes

Love is not love when you are unloved

I am foolish because I love thee

And I am yet left unloved.

Submitted: August 04, 2007

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darling, i have no idea how you do it, but you always touch my heart with your words.

this is certainly no exception. a beautiful piece, but with so much pain.

Sat, August 4th, 2007 2:07pm


Thank you so much darlin, i'm so thrilled that you liked it.


Sat, August 4th, 2007 7:12am


To be as young as you are you have such a gift with words.keep up the good work.

Sun, August 5th, 2007 8:12pm


Thank you so much "girlish", nice to read this.

Sun, August 5th, 2007 1:27pm

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