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Jeff Bezaire
Great atmosphere created with this piece. I especially like the lines: "Shattered shadows", "Sharp smile", and "Charcoal choke". Great imagery!
Wed, September 2nd, 2015 4:48amAuthor
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Thank you! I like to use some alliteration from time to time
Wed, September 2nd, 2015 8:10pm