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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is what happens when i get bored...

Dark skies

Grey smoke

Drugged streets

Charcoal choke

Shattered shadows

Lurking eyes

Sharp smile

Battle cry

Wilting flowers 

Say goodbye

Final breath

Now die.

Submitted: September 02, 2015

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Jeff Bezaire

Great atmosphere created with this piece. I especially like the lines: "Shattered shadows", "Sharp smile", and "Charcoal choke". Great imagery!

Wed, September 2nd, 2015 4:48am


Thank you! I like to use some alliteration from time to time

Wed, September 2nd, 2015 8:10pm

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