lights in the darkness

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being lost in the darkness is so lonely,so take my hand reach for light.

Light in the darkness

By:true pain

I for once have noticed that this world is flawed and the revolting reality has concealed its self in the abyss of regret only seeing darkness. I’ve noticed that a world that has been hollowed out cannot see a light in the darkness.They wallow in their shame reaching to only catch air between their fingers.hauling for freedom like a beaten dog. I’ve noticed these thing with painful sight ,these horrible things,but I still reach for the The Light In the Darkness.

Submitted: February 17, 2012

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Yume chan

Keep Reaching Girl! The light is there. Great writing once again you really know how to work with feelings and a passion. Yes our world has become insanely dark, dark to the point that despair seems to be the only thing left to feel. But never should we give up, for one, i wont let the dark conquer me! I wont just lay down and let it consume me, i'll fight and fight and scratch it's eyes out so it wont follow me anymore hehe^^ (not that i think it has eyes though, but oh well hehe) GREAT POEM!

Tue, April 17th, 2012 5:05am



Tue, April 17th, 2012 9:37am

meenakshi sharma

i really likw your this work ... this was very well written.. light in darkness is a hope .. which we never have to give up ... anyways gr8 wrk .. keep on writing .

Fri, June 1st, 2012 3:47am



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