losing to myself

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

its about what is like to be lost in a world you call yours.

I've lost so many things in life fighting for whats mine trying to protect myself in the darkness. Just to be beaten in by the people I love the most criticized by the people I loved the most fighting whats in front opening my Eyes to darkness being lost once is all thats left. tears burn my eyes, screams pierce my ears like siren last... lost, forgoten.... hated.

Submitted: January 29, 2012

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true reborn

I hope every one likes this poem I tried my best so write me some comments plz :)

Sun, January 29th, 2012 1:40am

true reborn

im thinking of writing a poem of how things would be in "what if"

Mon, February 6th, 2012 7:14pm

Yume chan

Seems like the topic of lost in darkness is a popular one to you. I dont know if you are talking about yourself, or just expressing feelings through your writing on sad days. But just know that you will be ok^^ The lost shall be found. In order for us to appreciate the light, darkness must be there to be defeated. Great poem with tons of feeling, i feel kind of gloomy reading through your poems hehe it is sad but FIGHT ON! i'll even give you tons of cookies if it'll help :)

Tue, April 17th, 2012 5:09am



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