Deep Into The Blue

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is basically about two ppl. obv. isnt that all u need to know

When you looked at me

I could finally see

The pain inside your eyes

That made you wanna fly

On that solemn day

I gelt as though I lost you

Almost like you flew

Deep into the blue

Those cuts there on your wrist

As you clench your fist

The blood-soaked towel on the floor

No matter how much they try you never open the door

On that solemn day

I could have lost you

Almost like you flew

Deep into the blue

As you see the red

You wish you were dead

Your life's falling apart

All that pain inside your heart

On that solemn day

I was afraid I would loose you

Almost like you flew

Deep into the blue


Submitted: March 13, 2008

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snowbelle

amazing writing. you are obviously a friend worth having. dont ever lose your friend, real friends are hard to find. if you have one real friend you are lucky.
take care
snow

Tue, April 1st, 2008 4:48pm

SplatterpunkShelbs

That is so beautiful! I can tell it stems from pretty deep emotion. Keep writing!

Sat, April 26th, 2008 7:37am

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