Open Your Eyes

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Booksie Classic

Just read it these things are sooo stupid i feel like if u wanna know what its about just read it

Open your eyes

To the beautiful blue skies

Where there’s no pain

And lots to gain

No more blows

Concealing the bruises underneath your clothes

He hurts you a lot

Your eyes are bloodshot

From all the pills

You take after the chills

That go through your body

After he drinks his whiskey

You come to me for comfort

You say he treats you like dirt and tell me why you hurt

I tell you to open your eyes

To the beautiful blue skies

Where there’s no pain

And lots to gain


Submitted: March 13, 2008

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EdwardJBradleySr

lives2write:

Well written: Good rhythm and rhyming scheme. Gave it an "I Like It." vote.

Not sure the advice being given is sufficiently concrete. To benefit the person to whom it is being given.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Thu, March 13th, 2008 6:02am

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