i lost someone close to me that i loved and now their gone....

you whisper so softly into my ear
and said everything will be alright
you closed your eyes
and gently kissed me on the top of my head
and said quietly
" this isnt goodbye"
the next thing i knew
you were out the door
that moment i knew
you were already gone
knew you werent coming back 
and that would be the last time i saw
the look in your eye
that held me together from the start
as you walked farther away
your figure began to fade
with a blink of the eye
you were no longer there
so tell me somehow
that you still care
when your no longer here
days went by 
you never came
the next thing i knew
i was standing,
on your grave....
with a rose in hand
and tears falling down
i drop to my knees
and begged you "please"
i couldnt believe 
that this was the end
that was the last "goodbye"
and the last time
i saw that look in your eye.....

Submitted: February 09, 2009

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oh, it's a terrible feeling to lose a loved one. this makes me feel so sad T_T but it's well-penned and you got the emotion and feel of the poem well. it's easy to see that it comes straight from the heart. great work.

and also, i'm sorry for your loss :(

Mon, February 9th, 2009 1:26am


thanks =[

Sun, February 8th, 2009 5:27pm


T_T Im so sorry Chels! (i think i know who your talking about but im not sure...)

Mon, February 9th, 2009 2:49am


im sure you know

Sun, February 8th, 2009 6:51pm


Then yes i know...im so sorry...

Mon, February 9th, 2009 2:55am


its ok

Sun, February 8th, 2009 6:56pm

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