The portrait of the Woman in Father's study

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The portrait of the Woman in Father's study

Status: Finished

The portrait of the Woman in Father's study

Poem by: tvmotltf134

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Genre: Poetry

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Overall, it's a good poem, but I really really really hate the ending!! But my teacher likes it and I can't come up with any ideas for the ending.

Summary

Overall, it's a good poem, but I really really really hate the ending!! But my teacher likes it and I can't come up with any ideas for the ending.

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Submitted: August 11, 2009

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Submitted: August 11, 2009

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Standing in my Father’s study,
I see a portrait of a Woman
Father thinks the portrait is very important
But I don’t know why
 
The woman is sitting on a stool
She has long, brown hair
That falls over her shoulders
Like a water-fall
 
She has dark green eyes
That resemble the
Lush, green, bursting forest
 
She has a lovely nose
Not too long
Not too short
Just perfect
 
She doesn’t smile in the portrait,
She frowns
 
I wonder why my Father
Hung the portrait
Of a woman who frowned
On the wall in his study
 
I wonder why the woman frowned
 
Maybe she was tired, angry and frustrated
Maybe she didn’t want a portrait done about her
If she smiled, her beauty would be like
Roses among thorns
 
I wondered who the woman was
 
I heard my name being called
So I left the study
The image of the woman, who frowned in the portrait,
Was in my memory.


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