Renesmee's Birthday

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fan Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

Renesmee gets a B-day gift from Jake but do Edward and Bella approve of it?

Renesmee POV

Chapter 1:My birthday!

I woke up this morning to the smell of grandma Esme making what smelled like bacon and eggs. I had on a pair of silky pok-a-dot sleep shorts and a whit tank top, I walked down the stairs rubbing my eyes and yawning, (somthing that always seems to make my parents laugh.) I was so tired, probably because I didn't gogto sleep til almost 3 in the morning. I got to the very last step and my parents greet me with "Good morning," but as i walked into the kitchenI seen a big stack, of what looked like......... presents? What istoday? "Um, your birthday Nessie!" of course that was my father, reading my thought like usual. "OMG today is my birthday!" I'm technicaly only turning 12, but I'm fully grown, andI looklike I'm 18.

Wow, how did I forget my own birthday? "Well that's a good question Nessie, but then again it might be because you've been sneaking out with Jacob and not coming home untill 3 or 4 in the morning? But thats also just my suspicions." he said with a smile, which of course he found ou about my whole sneaking out with Jacob thing. But then again he doesnt know that I went to a party last night! ha ha ha! Finally something he doesn't know!! "Well Nessie, um yes actually nowI do know and your in a lot of trouble! But right now you should probably go get dressed, Jacob wants you to meet him at La Push." "Ok, thanks for telling me dad!" I yelled as I ran up the stairs.

Gosh, I was so glad that my dad couldn't here my thoughts while I was up here. If he could I'd be in so much trouble! But only because if he here's me curse in my thoughts I get in a lot of trouble.

After I was dressed I ran to La Push, when i got there Jacob was waiting for me, I ran into his arms and we kissed. "Hey Jake!!Guess what?" Isaid this with enthusiasum. "What Nessie?" "We're in so much trouble thats what! My dad read my thoughts and found out about the party last night! OH! And all the other nihts we've snuck out!"

"Great! But can I show you something? it's a birthday present!" "Um, sure, why not?" "Ok close your eyes, and come this way, and.........stop!" Oh my god if my dad see's this he wiil flip! "Thanks jake it's so nice! But you know my dad isn't going to let me ride a dirt bike, right?"

Submitted: June 04, 2010

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Beautiful Liar

Lol, can't WAIT to see Eddy's reaction! O-M-E!

Fri, June 4th, 2010 2:57am


I liked it a lot! Short though...but it's cool! I bet Edward would be fine since Bella rode a motorcycle when he was away. Update me? :]

Fri, June 4th, 2010 6:46am


im debating on using wat u said or making him and bella have a freakout! lol!! :]

Sat, July 3rd, 2010 9:43pm



Fri, June 4th, 2010 6:53am


hurry....and update plz...

Fri, June 4th, 2010 7:35pm


sure thing! lol

Sat, July 3rd, 2010 5:58pm


ok this first part is to dani71195: I was trying to go by what i read and i figured that if in eclipse jacob was taunting edward with thoughts about when he was gone, then the whole motorcycle thing whith bella getting hurt and stuff would make edward think that it wouldnt be good for Nessie! ok so i hope u understand what i meant!? Then of course im going to keep you all updated, just look for renesmee's birthday chapter 2! thanks for commenting!

Tue, June 8th, 2010 11:38am


It kind of goes along fast, and had some spelling/typos/grammar problems, but it was good

Wed, June 16th, 2010 10:20am


I know, about the typos and things cuz i was up til i think bout 4:30 writing it1 lol i mean it took me a while to think of a good story! lol but thanks and there is more to it ive just been out of tow alot! lol

Sat, July 3rd, 2010 5:57pm


plz update soon - is renesmee bday chpt 2 a seperate short story?

Thu, June 2nd, 2011 11:26pm


Yes it is!

I'll try been kinda busy with school so plz plz don't get all yelly, angry grr!! lol jk


Wed, December 7th, 2011 9:48pm

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