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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Just one of my darker writings

furious and enraged
here i sit
here i am in turmoil
the rage and intense anger swells
deep within it erupts
no longer can i control it
violently shaking
knuckles turning white
sweat pouring off my brow
the war with in is out
thinking nothing but pain
nothing but hatred
nothing but anguish
who's next
what now
keep it coming
keep bringing more
the beast has awaken
been beaten from his slumber
now the embrace of pain and anger
rages outward
uncontrolled unrefined
the monster arises
the pain and Apocalypse is upon you
prepare yourself
i am coming
the beast is unleashed
and i will allow its guilty lust
for pain
and anger
the wrath is here
guilty as charged
awaken afraid
live in fear
dread of sleep
for its unleashed
there will be no rest
there will be no mercy
Twisted Illusions
copyright 9/25/2007

Submitted: February 09, 2008

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This is the best poem I have read ever in my life time. Usually I don't like free verse, but this is a great exception. I really liked it. Just watch your punctuation because it just seems like one big run on sentence. Still incredibly fantastic:)

Sat, February 9th, 2008 10:59pm


Thanks Broken, means more when you say you usually dont care for free verse and that you enjoyed mine. Thanks!!

Sat, February 9th, 2008 3:39pm

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