Forget the Distance. Remember me.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

For maybe... a week now? Or longer, I've been sending some sweet emails to my boyfriend (Cheesy I know!) ANYWAY, I sent this to him. It isn't great, but you know... best I can do when my bed was calling me nearly 45 minutes ago;D

 

Wrapped arms,

Holding tight,

Great big sighs,

Through the night.

 

Sweet whispers,

That special word,

Heart beats fast,

Images blurred,

 

Holding hands,

Twinkling stars,

Distance is nothing,

We’re never too far.

 

Kisses deep,

Not lust but love,

Arms around waist,

Your loves enough,

 

Eyes are gazing,

Emotions are told,

For you are perfection,

My pot of Gold,

 

Sweet mists,

Coming from you,

Contact that's been,

way over due.

 

Wrapped arms,

Holding tight,

Hold me tight to your heart,

So I shall sleep safely tonight.


Submitted: November 24, 2011

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Cyber Dood

For something done in such a short time, you really did a fine job on this. I'm sure he appreciates what you've written.

Thu, November 24th, 2011 9:49pm

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I hope he does(;
Thank you very much!

Fri, November 25th, 2011 12:31am

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breanna33b

WOW this is a really really sweet poem. I absolutely cant say nothing except for I LOVE IT !!!!!! Never give up. your a great writer. keep it up!:)

Thu, November 24th, 2011 10:35pm

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Aaaaw;D!
Thank you for the sweet comment!
I'm not great-__-! I'm pretty sure you could do better;D!x

Fri, November 25th, 2011 12:31am

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mik31035

Thats great :D if you can write something that good when your tired think of what you could write if you were wide awake :D

Sat, November 26th, 2011 9:45am

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I never thought of it that way:o!
*Thumbs up* Thank you for the sweet as honey comment:)!x

Sat, November 26th, 2011 3:36am

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Miss Ice

Wow, this is very good considering the amount of time you wrote it in. Thumbs up! (:

Sun, November 27th, 2011 8:30pm

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and thumbs up to you too:)
Thank you for the sweet comment! ;)

Sun, November 27th, 2011 12:41pm

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bobthebuilder

That was very good, sweet, sincere! Real emotion just flows onto the page, no thought required!

Wed, November 30th, 2011 4:54am

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*cringes* Thank you(:
Talking about emotions can make me cringe a lot:S!x
But poetry seems fine from time to time:)!x

Wed, November 30th, 2011 8:57am

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