Seeing You Through My Eyes

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

We choose to believe that we aren't special, but to someone else we are more..

You hide behind the shadows to let others shine

You are beautiful to me; Oh how I wish you were mine

Like heaven's stars, you sparkle brighter than ever before

Can't you see how wonderful you are

I stand in awe watching you

Seeing your heart filled with love and passion

Eyes that show others compassion

The way you laugh melts my heart

You are there when my world is torn apart

Don't you see how gorgeous you are

Taking the time to be with me

You will always be a diamond

Priceless and a work of art

Your beauty is beyond compare

If only you can see yourself through my eyes

My angel; my love

A treasure that will forever be

Mine for eternity


Submitted: April 03, 2010

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Felipe Lima

Amazing piece, Txangel! So passionate, so touching... I loved how truly it sound. I can't stop imagine how wonderful is when we hear someone tell us how great we are... How important and priceless we are. Congratz, I just fell in love for your piece. You got my "I Like It" vote, sweetheart.

Best Regards,
Felipe :]

Tue, May 4th, 2010 5:26am

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I'm so happy that you liked it hon..I feel that this one was my best one yet..

Tue, May 4th, 2010 6:43am

Violet Moon

Wow. This was amazing. I really liked this piece. It's so true and relatable. I know exactly how you were feeling when you wrote this. I really liked it. You got a vote from me.

Oh, and sorry I haven't gotten around to checking out your novels yet. I was working on getting caught up on a few things and still am. Plus there has been so much going on in my life and I'm trying to deal with my boyfriend's and my breakup and all the stuff I'm finding out about that relates to our relationship. Sorry, I know I shouldn't be making excuses. haha. But I swear I'll get around to the novels when I can give them my full attention. For this moment though, I'll check out a few more poems.

Good job on this one though! :D

*Violet*

Thu, July 15th, 2010 2:56pm

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It's all good honey, I've been going through so much as well. All I can say is one step at a time.

Sun, July 18th, 2010 11:37am

City Of Evil

Wow, this was absolutly beautiful, i loved the descriptive yet beautiful lines in here. It was really really sweet and good, and I really hoppe you dont mind, i want to put you on my favorite authors list, I mean, Your poems are really good, and i love poems to death.

Loved your rhyme scheme. Great job.

~Lazarus~

Mon, August 9th, 2010 5:42pm

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I'm glad you enjoyed the poem hon. And no I don't mind if you put me in your favorite author's list.

Mon, August 9th, 2010 10:57am

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