Bipolar Crescendo

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A poem.

 

...It was hard to learn...
life? 
perpetual 
monumental
cupidity
of death!
 
Born meaningless
(always)
grasping for happiness
 
raised in false belief
(oppresing)
immense grief
 
For it is I 
you see
ME
Who
I don't
WANT TO BE
 
...(a)(e)nd...
Only when i pass
will i really live
and only end
yearns for the beginning
 
Am I
subsistent?
Am I 
content?
 
Speaking of essence
leaves me speachless
to endeavour presence
I'll dwell godless
 
REALITY
exuse for pain
pretext to chain
sobriety
of doubtful mind
 
DEATH
OF CUPIDITY
MONUMENTAL
PERPETUAL
LIFE!
...It was hard to learn...


Submitted: April 02, 2012

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Louisdcree

This is a very good poem and touches my heart. I have seen and felt what bipolar does, some days are better than others. Keep writing. People need to realise the truth. :) Louisdcree

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 7:45am

Insane Membrane

well .. mixed feelings about this one :-) nicely written well done

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 8:51am

Insane Membrane

Mind you they should never have renamed Maniac Depressive as Bi Polar it was a much more impressive illness as the fore but the after lightens to being something that one might pick up at a brothel or a evening shared with with twin bears ...
( I came back to hit the like button)

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 8:58am

Tyos

Thank you all for the positive comments. I really appriciate it as I didn't expect and feedback whatsoever to be honest :).
About the poem... I must admit the title can be misleading. When writing I was thinking about bipolar nature of our existance in general. I wanted to point out the everlasting struggle between good and evil on one hand and the struggle between our limited existance and eternity on the other.

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 4:36pm

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