You have just been broken-hearted,
You've lost the one you thought would be with you forever.
You think that there's no second chance,
Well you're not alone.
There are others who have been what you're going through,
People who have lost the one they wanted.
People who were left wondering where it went wrong,
They understand what you're going through.
Some of them could be your friends,
Some could be your family.
No matter who it is,
Eventually, someone has their heart broken.
But everyone says that you deserve better,
And they couldn't be more right.
You'll love again,
You just need to wait until that true one comes.
That will be the person who will hold you in their arms,
That will be the person who will never let you go.
That will be the person who kisses you everyday without hesitation,
That will be the person who says "I love you" and lives to what they say.
You may think you'll never love again,
That you can't live without that person and that you want to stay in the past.
There comes a time when we all think this,
But there's also a time when everyone says "You deserve better."
And right now, that's what you need.
Submitted: March 06, 2016
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This was beautiful, and it brought tears to my eyes. Thank you so much for writing this for me... (:
Mon, March 7th, 2016 7:48pmHey! This poem is so true......Every line of the poem is so connecting......This is really good.... I loved it.........Well done and Good Luck
Thu, April 21st, 2016 3:05pmWow. I'm actually lost for words. That was so flipping beautiful. You did a really good job of showing the emotions of a heart being broken and the narrative perfectly mirrors a supportive friend. I think it's amazing.
Sat, April 23rd, 2016 8:56pmI love this so much. Your writing is beautiful.
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Sun, August 14th, 2016 3:16amThats a great story, but I know that sometimes I have a problem about my friends not texting me back.
Thu, September 8th, 2016 6:46pmnce poem with true feelings.....
Thu, September 22nd, 2016 12:47pmI just have one simple phrase for wonderful this is-
'Standing O'
Amazing
Almost made me cry! It's a beautiful poem. Kepp making more like these please!!!
Tue, March 14th, 2017 7:58pmThis one is beautiful! :)
Thu, March 16th, 2017 5:47pmvery well said - its a universal theme for sure ...
I like this but I feel should add a touch more optimism. :)
Tue, August 29th, 2017 6:29pmthat is so true
Sat, October 28th, 2017 4:02amSpeechless. This is so amazing and beautifully written! I had to restrain myself from crying a bit.
Wed, November 1st, 2017 10:33pmThis is beautiful :,)
Tue, January 15th, 2019 2:27amThis is really good. However, I think you are holding back a lot of potential. I feel that if you really put your mind to something, you could come out with something especially beautiful. Keep writing. Practice makes perfect.
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Lillia Winter
Wow...so many feels. It's a great poem keep up the good work.
Sun, March 6th, 2016 3:11pmAuthor
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Thx
Sun, March 6th, 2016 8:13am