You have just been broken-hearted,
You've lost the one you thought would be with you forever.
You think that there's no second chance,
Well you're not alone.
There are others who have been what you're going through,
People who have lost the one they wanted.
People who were left wondering where it went wrong,
They understand what you're going through.
Some of them could be your friends,
Some could be your family.
No matter who it is,
Eventually, someone has their heart broken.
But everyone says that you deserve better,
And they couldn't be more right.
You'll love again,
You just need to wait until that true one comes.
That will be the person who will hold you in their arms,
That will be the person who will never let you go.
That will be the person who kisses you everyday without hesitation,
That will be the person who says "I love you" and lives to what they say.
You may think you'll never love again,
That you can't live without that person and that you want to stay in the past.
There comes a time when we all think this,
But there's also a time when everyone says "You deserve better."
And right now, that's what you need.
Submitted: March 06, 2016
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This was beautiful, and it brought tears to my eyes. Thank you so much for writing this for me... (:
Mon, March 7th, 2016 7:48pm
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You're welcome, Meg. I make people who have had a broken heart my first priority seeing that I can relate to them more closely than others.
Mon, March 7th, 2016 12:08pm
Hey! This poem is so true......Every line of the poem is so connecting......This is really good.... I loved it.........Well done and Good Luck
Thu, April 21st, 2016 3:05pm
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Thank you so much.
Thu, January 26th, 2017 4:12am
Wow. I'm actually lost for words. That was so flipping beautiful. You did a really good job of showing the emotions of a heart being broken and the narrative perfectly mirrors a supportive friend. I think it's amazing.
Sat, April 23rd, 2016 8:56pm
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Well thank you for the amazing comment.
Thu, January 26th, 2017 4:12am
I love this so much. Your writing is beautiful.
Fri, June 24th, 2016 4:09pm
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Well thank you
Thu, January 26th, 2017 4:10am
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Sun, August 14th, 2016 3:16am
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Sure thing. And thanks.
Thu, January 26th, 2017 4:10am
Thats a great story, but I know that sometimes I have a problem about my friends not texting me back.
Thu, September 8th, 2016 6:46pm
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I'm glad you like it.
Thu, January 26th, 2017 4:07am
nce poem with true feelings.....
Thu, September 22nd, 2016 12:47pm
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Thanks a lot. Glad you like it.
Thu, January 26th, 2017 4:07am
I just have one simple phrase for wonderful this is-
'Standing O'
Amazing
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Thanks
Thu, January 26th, 2017 4:06am
Almost made me cry! It's a beautiful poem. Kepp making more like these please!!!
Tue, March 14th, 2017 7:58pm
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I will.
Wed, March 15th, 2017 4:04am
This one is beautiful! :)
Thu, March 16th, 2017 5:47pm
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Glad you like it.
Fri, March 17th, 2017 4:05am
very well said - its a universal theme for sure ...
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Why thank you.
Thu, September 14th, 2017 4:08am
I like this but I feel should add a touch more optimism. :)
Tue, August 29th, 2017 6:29pm
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Thanks for your imput.
Thu, September 14th, 2017 4:09am
that is so true
Sat, October 28th, 2017 4:02am
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Oh?
Mon, October 30th, 2017 4:06am
Speechless. This is so amazing and beautifully written! I had to restrain myself from crying a bit.
Wed, November 1st, 2017 10:33pm
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Thanks
Sun, November 5th, 2017 12:57am
This is beautiful :,)
Tue, January 15th, 2019 2:27am
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Glad you enjoyed it.
Tue, January 15th, 2019 11:55am
This is really good. However, I think you are holding back a lot of potential. I feel that if you really put your mind to something, you could come out with something especially beautiful. Keep writing. Practice makes perfect.
Wed, February 12th, 2020 2:39am
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This poem is years old. My skills have improved since then.
Thu, March 12th, 2020 6:15pmFacebook Comments
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Wow...so many feels. It's a great poem keep up the good work.
Sun, March 6th, 2016 3:11pmAuthor
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Thx
Sun, March 6th, 2016 8:13am