You Deserved Better
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Poem by: Tyrannos Senpai
You have just been broken-hearted,
You've lost the one you thought would be with you forever.
You think that there's no second chance,
Well you're not alone.
There are others who have been what you're going through,
People who have lost the one they wanted.
People who were left wondering where it went wrong,
They understand what you're going through.
Some of them could be your friends,
Some could be your family.
No matter who it is,
Eventually, someone has their heart broken.
But everyone says that you deserve better,
And they couldn't be more right.
You'll love again,
You just need to wait until that true one comes.
That will be the person who will hold you in their arms,
That will be the person who will never let you go.
That will be the person who kisses you everyday without hesitation,
That will be the person who says "I love you" and lives to what they say.
You may think you'll never love again,
That you can't live without that person and that you want to stay in the past.
There comes a time when we all think this,
But there's also a time when everyone says "You deserve better."
And right now, that's what you need.
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Wow...so many feels. It's a great poem keep up the good work.
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Thx
This was beautiful, and it brought tears to my eyes. Thank you so much for writing this for me... (:
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You're welcome, Meg. I make people who have had a broken heart my first priority seeing that I can relate to them more closely than others.
I really like it :)
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Thank you.
Hey! This poem is so true......Every line of the poem is so connecting......This is really good.... I loved it.........Well done and Good Luck
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Thank you so much.
Wow. I'm actually lost for words. That was so flipping beautiful. You did a really good job of showing the emotions of a heart being broken and the narrative perfectly mirrors a supportive friend. I think it's amazing.
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Well thank you for the amazing comment.
I love this so much. Your writing is beautiful.
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Well thank you
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Sure thing. And thanks.
Thats a great story, but I know that sometimes I have a problem about my friends not texting me back.
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I'm glad you like it.
nce poem with true feelings.....
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Thanks a lot. Glad you like it.
I just have one simple phrase for wonderful this is-
'Standing O'
Amazing
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Thanks
Almost made me cry! It's a beautiful poem. Kepp making more like these please!!!
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I will.
This one is beautiful! :)
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Glad you like it.
It has many feelings i
i liked it so much!!
Keep up the good work
Melody 1
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Glad you like it.
very well said - its a universal theme for sure ...
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Why thank you.
I like this but I feel should add a touch more optimism. :)
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Thanks for your imput.
that is so true
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Oh?
Speechless. This is so amazing and beautifully written! I had to restrain myself from crying a bit.
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Thanks
This is beautiful :,)
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Glad you enjoyed it.
This is really good. However, I think you are holding back a lot of potential. I feel that if you really put your mind to something, you could come out with something especially beautiful. Keep writing. Practice makes perfect.
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This poem is years old. My skills have improved since then.
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