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Poem by: Tyrone Slade

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Submitted: December 12, 2006

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No comments, no comments,

But double digit reads,

No loves, no hates,

But everyone is watching,

Or so it seems.

Do I get no comments,

Because my time and efforts,

Are not worth comments at all?

Or is it because you don't have,

Nothing nice to say,

So you say nothing at all?

I spent so much time trying,

Trying to express how I feel,

How I felt,

How I suffered,

How I dealt,

Down on paper,

Instead of crying to my self.

I've been THE HATER times 4,

An ANGRY GANGSTA five,

Studied THE ART OF MUTALATION,

Suffered from MENTAL PROBLEMS,

And shared them in my rhymes,

Then I saw THE LIGHT,

And found my FAITH.

On THE PATH I've been on,

I've taken MY WALK,

It has brought me a lot,

A lot of LOVE AND LUST AND LOVE,

And I give it in two parts,

I've gone through,

A METAMORPHASIS, but at times

At times my words seem worthless,

Now I welcome good and BAD VOICES,

But now I SEE THE TRUTH times two,

I need a REMINDER,

Something that reminds ME,

Of a LOVE REVEALED.

So I'm asking you.

Is my LIFE A GAME,

Left in THE COOKING POT,

Or is this electronic WORLD TO CROWDED?

Now I ask, WHO IS TO BLAME?

Will someone help my poetic health,

For if I die poetically,

Please, feel free,

To have the ABSOLUTE FREEDOM,

To blame yourself.

But Iask you,

How am I to get better?

So I leave you A FATHER'S LETTER.

I CAN'T assume I do great work.

Where is my strength,

Where do I hit or miss?

I would not mind.

If you laughed at IT.

Now can you tell me who is,

Who really is THE MONSTER?

Oh, wait, sorry if I lost ya.

Do you prefer RHYME OR REASON?

Do you like pretty sounding words,

Or do you like thought to have meaning?

If you are reading mine,

Then please, leave some of yours.

I'd be THANKFUL.


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