Let Summer Come

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

In life, sometimes you just have to let go and be patient, until the thing taken away from you is given back to you... At times when it seems that there is no hope, the key is to keep holding on, and just believe...

We're apart now, but we'll meet again...

You said we are the two leaves of the same tree,

But the tree has withered,

And we have been shed.

But wail not, for it's roots are still strong;

Let Summer come,

It will bring ripened love with it,

And our tree will grow again;

We'll born again.


Submitted: August 11, 2010

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Unbreakablee

I like it. Its strong but soft at the same time - if you know what i mean.
It is truly beautiful.
The meaning behind it is extraordinary. :D love it.

((If you could check out some of my things, and give me some feedback, I would appreciate it a lot.))

Thu, August 12th, 2010 4:43am

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Thanks alot... :)
and sure, I would love to return the favor...!

Thu, August 12th, 2010 1:51am

nid

well written poem !! love the last lines--very positive stuff---you a good writer---blessings---

Wed, August 18th, 2010 9:07am

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Thank you for liking...
I sure appreciate it... :)

Wed, August 18th, 2010 4:39pm

readerwriter10159

"...Two leaves of the same tree" i really like that, very creative. I liked this, You are a very good poet!

Thu, August 19th, 2010 6:57pm

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Actually this line; "We are two leaves of the same tree", these are actually my beloved's words, and through this poem, I'm answering back, telling him that the tree has withered and we have been shed.......
But I'm glad you liked it anyway. :)

Thu, August 19th, 2010 5:29pm

Unbreakablee

I just read this for the second time, and it was just as powerful as the first. I love it, you are so talented with your words.
I love the meaning of hope.

Sat, August 21st, 2010 3:58am

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Thank you so much dear! :)
"Hope" is all I have right now to keep going :)

Fri, August 20th, 2010 9:11pm

Bonvivantbetina

aww this is wonderful! i love it:)

Sat, August 28th, 2010 10:26am

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Thanks :)

Sat, August 28th, 2010 6:53am

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