The One-Winged Butterfly

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A one-winged butterfly emerges out of nowhere to show the darkest of times.

 

The One-Winged Butterfly

I look towards the sky and fall into despair.

The one-winged butterfly flies above me,

Which wallows in its beauty.

With its wondering splendor,

It fleets below me,

Catching me within its wing.

We enter a deep night,

Which paints the world black

And burns the seven candles out flat.

The only light comes from the one-winged butterfly,

Which enters eternal darkness.

Silhouette faces emerge out of the shadows to beckon with a smile

“Come here, to the deep forest of Hell.”

The butterfly sways around their remark.

It floats suddenly near the rumbling sea.

It then dips its one wing into the sea of sin.

And I wonder if the wing will become black with sin?

The wing emerges from the black sea,

To boast off its newly golden color of its wing.

The wing brings light back into the world.

Bringing forth the golden light of hope.

The seven trumpets that seep through the darkness,

Ring throughout the world,

Giving birth anew.

Ahead of us are seven pillars

That tremble beneath the one winged butterfly.

They crumble to the ground creating a new land.

The Golden Land opens its way to a crimson life.

The butterfly then sends me to my demise,

Where it then speaks in a solemnly soft voice.

“Are you without sin?

Are you with Love?

Are you without lies?

Are you with ME?”

“Your final judgment has been given.

Now accept your fate,

and win this Golden Land in the next game.”

In my last breath, I breathe in the golden air.

In my last touch, I feel the golden wing.

In my last sight, I see the one-winged butterfly flying to the Golden Land.

I know now that the game will soon begin again.


Submitted: September 14, 2011

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kesar

Excellent piece of work,simply brilliant,thums up

Wed, September 14th, 2011 5:29pm

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Thanks for your comment! This was actually my first piece of work.

Wed, September 14th, 2011 10:35am

Lyric01

I like it. it 's very meaningful! I absolutely adore it. Very...Unexpected. But in a Good way(:

Wed, September 14th, 2011 11:42pm

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Thanks for your feedback! I'm glad you liked it! If you have any poems or stories, I'll gladly read them.

Wed, September 14th, 2011 4:49pm

whytho

I like the way you incorporated the story of the butterfly into your poem. It's very nice, has a wonderful flow. :) The message conveyed is great!

Thu, September 15th, 2011 10:29pm

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Thanks!I had been stuck on this poem for 2 days trying to figure out the path of the story. It's good to know it had a nice flow.

Thu, September 15th, 2011 3:44pm

Kenneth James

really love the way you decribe it, very nicely done :)

Thu, September 15th, 2011 11:00pm

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Thanks! I'm glad you liked the description of the butterfly. I tried my best to give some description enough to let people have an image of it.

Thu, September 15th, 2011 4:09pm

bornfree

wow!!!I wish I could write like you....
...really breathtaking ..:))

Sat, September 17th, 2011 9:44am

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Thanks!!! Its good to know that you thought well of this poem.

Sat, September 17th, 2011 8:02am

siirdarkmaz

wow!!! great story. this is wonderful.

Tue, September 20th, 2011 8:44pm

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Thanks for the Feedback!

Wed, September 21st, 2011 9:05am

arun

Simply put - a masterpiece. I loved it...

Thu, October 20th, 2011 12:31pm

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Thanks for that Awesome comment!... And Thanks for being a fan!

Thu, October 20th, 2011 6:25am

Silhouette Akasuna

Wow, great poem ^^

Fri, October 28th, 2011 7:48pm

Author
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Thank you! :-)

Fri, October 28th, 2011 12:57pm

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