Departed Souls

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A little something from a piece that I wrote a few years back after the passing of my boyfriend. I hope you all like it.

Your eyes were once locked with mine,
Your lips once carved into mine
And your heart once loved me.
But now our souls have departed
We are gone from each other now,
Like death lost into earth’s history

Submitted: September 14, 2010

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This is very deep and emotional. It is hard to let go of someone we love, but knowing that absence make the heart grow fonder, eases our minds knowing one day you will meet again with a greater love for one another.
I'm terribly sorry about your friend, and know that it is but a moment that you see him again.
Loved this!

Wed, September 15th, 2010 6:42am


Thankyou Angellynn, and yes that is true knowing that we will meet again gives us hope. Thanks for reading and commenting, im glad you liked it. Emily.

Wed, September 15th, 2010 7:17am


ive never seen emotion put into so few lines. thankyou and sorry.

Thu, September 16th, 2010 11:51pm


Thankyou a lot. It means heaps to me.

Thu, September 16th, 2010 4:59pm

Christian Taylor

Beautifully written! :) Great work!

Mon, September 27th, 2010 8:36am



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