Last Letter To You

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Those lies,

Still echoing

Through me

As I lie there

Still vulnerable to your love

Reflecting on your lies,

Remembering the way you told me

How you loved me.

Those lies,

Still echoing

Through me

As I lie there

Still vulnerable to your love

You said you'd come

You said you'd never leave

And that you'd always love me

But how I never knew those were lies

I only saw beautiful lips

Whispering what I longed to hear

What I needed to hear

From someone so handsome and strong

But those were lies,

I was blinded by your love

That love you promised me was real

That you breathed in the summer night

Those lies

That killed me from inside

So let me write to you this,

My last letter to you.

I will be strong

Once again

And although you broke my heart

You didnt break my soul

\"\"


Submitted: September 08, 2010

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lost in translation

This is really good. I can feel the frustration behind your words caused by a broken heart. I espiecally love the last two lines. Keep up the good work. L.I.T.

Wed, September 8th, 2010 8:37am

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Thankyou L.I.T, im glad you liked it and thankyou for your comment.

Wed, September 8th, 2010 10:11am

Christian Taylor

Truly one of your best poetry pieces that I've read so far! You put so much emotion into it that I can just feel it as I am reading it. Excellent work! :)

Wed, September 8th, 2010 6:07pm

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Thankyou so much Taylor, I appreciate your comment a lot. It has made my day, and I am certainly not worthy of such praise, thankyou again.

Wed, September 8th, 2010 12:50pm

livingwater15

This one is my far my favorite of yours! The last two lines were absolutely amazing. This whole poem was something like music. :)))

Thu, September 9th, 2010 12:12pm

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Thankyou dear, so much, your comment is very much appreciated. Blessings.

Thu, September 9th, 2010 6:57am

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