Our Love

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is the 2nd thing i ever really wrote, and i thought id post it on booksie, hope you like! :)

'Love is inseparable,
No matter how far we part, you’ll always be in my heart.'

Our Love
Love is indescribable,
There are not enough words to say how it makes me feel.
Love is inseparable,
No matter how far we part, you’ll always be in my heart.
Love is honesty,
The truth between us cannot be separated.
Love is true,
When I’m with you I feel like nothing else matters.
Love is you,
You are all I need.
Love is us.
Forever more, my heart will never leave you.
You are my world, my everything, my all.

Submitted: November 10, 2009

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curious reader

Great poem I was feeling every word as I read it.
I'm not an expert on love but from reading that poem I feel as if I know a lot more about it:)

Tue, November 10th, 2009 8:06am


thx alot, really glad you liked it, ill try to get around to reading some of yours.

Sat, November 14th, 2009 12:39am


aww do u have a person u feel that way about? *sigh* wish i could find one to feel that way about but lately it feels like searching for a pin in the Pacific Ocean.

Tue, November 10th, 2009 10:12am


hey bimbobunny, glad u liked it, ill try to read some of urs too, i dont really have someone special its complicated :) yer its always like that looking for that special somone is always the most difficult but dont worry when u find that special one your life will be changed dramatically, just make sure never to let him/her go. :)

Sat, November 14th, 2009 12:38am


Hey em, this is REALLY good lol... I love your writing lil sis keep it up

Sat, November 14th, 2009 9:14am


Hey kell, thanks, im glad u liked it.. thanks for editing it for me!! Love u sis.. xx

Sat, November 14th, 2009 2:00am

Graeme Montrose

nice poem! enjoyable and from the heart! Keep writing.

Sat, November 14th, 2009 12:28pm


Thanks.. glad u liked it :)

Sat, November 14th, 2009 3:03pm


nice, very real cant wait to read more of your stuff

Tue, November 24th, 2009 1:56pm


Thankyou, glad you liked it :)

Ill try and read some of yours :)

Thu, November 26th, 2009 3:44am


very gd work

Mon, October 4th, 2010 9:48am



Mon, October 4th, 2010 8:42am

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