The pain of love.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is a poem that I wrote for my Boyfriend that past away. So yeah, hope u like it...

The pain of love.
This could have been.
You could have been mine, and I yours.
We could have still felt the love that we once shared.
When I remember you in my memories,
I cannot help but to think of the moments of our unforgotten love
If only you listened to me.
And not go off with those people that only caused you death.
I told you.
I tried so much.
I put my everything in to our relationship.
And now you’re gone, I can’t help to think what could have been.
I wish that you never left me,
that he never killed you.
He killed the only person that mattered to me.
The only one I’ve only loved.
And the one that I’ll always love.
That night I felt the shock of the bullet go through my heart,
And when I got the call from the nurses in the hospital that you had been shot and that you died,
I knew from that second on that I, also, was dead.
The pain is unthinkable
That I cannot go there,
Not purposely,
This hurts more than ever before,
And I need to love you again
If only you could come to me
If only you could visit me once again in my dreams
I need to be with you,
I need to love again,
But the only person I will ever love is you.
And if it all falls apart, I will know deep in my heart, the only dream that mattered had come true. In this life, I was loved by you.
Colin Raye

Submitted: November 20, 2009

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Shea Ryhai

This brought tears to me, the emotions was so deep and real. I have a boyfriend in the army and it scars me whenever I think of something that might happen to him. I feel deeply for you. Best Wishes. Amazing write!

Fri, November 20th, 2009 5:31pm


Thankyou so much, Im glad you liked it.
Yer I guess you just have to keep strong for the ones you truely love. I wish you and your boyfriend all the best, god bless.
Thankyou again.

Fri, November 20th, 2009 10:15pm

Mistress of Word Play

So sad but brilliantly written. Love the color so pretty and you formatted the piece as well. Nice job. Susan :)

Sun, November 29th, 2009 9:04pm


thanku.. so glad you liked it:)
yeah i love formatting my writting :)
thankyou susan :)

Mon, November 30th, 2009 1:03am


Wow, this is written with alot of emotion. welldone, i really like it:D

Wed, August 18th, 2010 5:52pm


Thankyou, glad you enjoyed it.

Wed, August 18th, 2010 12:28pm


i liked this poem, sometimes the only thing that comes from pain so deep is poetry that is so emotive.

Fri, August 20th, 2010 4:15am


Thankyou. Im happy it was powerful.

Fri, August 20th, 2010 11:11am


I'm sorry this happened.
What a shock to the system.
As if something reached inside and just took more than your breath, but most of your being/the dance behind your eyes..
First thing we want to do sometimes is to die just to be with them.
And your line about visiting you in your dreams; did he?
The last part said the truest thing that is felt both before And after their passing;
"I will know deep in my heart,... In this life, I was loved by you."


Sun, September 5th, 2010 6:40pm


Thankyou for your concern.
And it very much felt like something reached inside and stole my breath, like I couldnt breath no more.
And yes, he did.
Sometimes that is the last you can feel, is that you were loved by him/her and sometimes that is the only thing that can make you strong, even if its only a bit.
Thankyou for your comment.

Mon, September 6th, 2010 11:26am


This is so sad. I was hoping it was fiction but then re-read and saw it really did happen. Be strong and remember the love you shared, nobody can ever take that away. I hope you find love again as you obviously have lots of love to give. Your poems show you have a very caring heart. Keep writing and take care. God Bless. Pat

Mon, September 6th, 2010 9:31pm


Thankyou so much Pat, I very much appreciate your comment. And yes, I have found love again to a guy that I am very happy with, experiencing death only made me a stronger person.
Your comment was lovely, thankyou for flattering me. Much Love, God Bless.

Mon, September 6th, 2010 2:37pm


Devastated for your loss unbreakablee, I felt all the passion, loss and sadness in your words, written from the heart. Truely beautiful, how lucky he was to have your love in his short life. x

Tue, September 14th, 2010 4:43am


Thankyou so much Bailey.

Tue, September 14th, 2010 9:30am


that is so sad ): I had a boyfriend die of cancer, so i know what its like...

Fri, January 28th, 2011 7:36am


Thankyou so much for your comment

Sat, March 5th, 2011 11:41am

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