Few words he has longed to hear.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic
Guy loves a girl but is to shy to tell the girl that he loves her.

Submitted: July 04, 2011

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Thoughts fill his mind as he wanders along the beach. Hopes and joy empty as the feelings for the girl he loved pour out into the orange sunset filling the sky with darkness. The tides slowly moving back 'n forth as if from a song from the heavens; he looks into the bright moon and wishes she was her to enjoy this moment with him but all of a sudden he hears this voice as if it's the voice of an angel calling to him; slowly he turns around and finds standing before him.. the girl he loves. They stare totally thoughtless until he walks over and looks into her eyes and says.. i love you. She stands there shocked, speechless perhaps. He holds her in his arms but this feeling he has is overwhelming.. it's as if he was standing on a cloud looking down at the world he once knew, sharing this cloud with his one true love and then finally, as the waves crash against the beach, he moves in and kisses her. Suddenly, she feels as if time has stopped. She captures this wonderful moment and wishes that it would never end. Tears fill each others eyes as he takes her hands, he feels relieved that she now knows the torture he endured keeping a secret like that for such a long time. As they walk home he hears her utter one last set of words of which he has been longing to here for such a long time.. I love you. 


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