A Stolen Breath

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A poem PLEASE READ !!! :)

Blood red eyes and smeard face

Pale white skin a cold embrace

left for dead  haunting smile

unloved forgotten like a mothers child

baby hush silenced screams

cry no more nightmarish dreams

face of child touch of death

breath is stolen life a mess

heart beat stops

blood turns cold

her life avegened and soul no more

By Chloe John xxx :)


Submitted: March 27, 2011

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Ninja Dexter of the Forgotten Souls

This is really good.

Sun, March 27th, 2011 2:08pm

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omg really tbh i dnt think it is xxxx thank you soo much !!! chloe xxx :)

Mon, March 28th, 2011 2:26am

dylanross83

You took me on a rollercoaster of feelings and memories and images. Than you.

Sun, March 27th, 2011 2:17pm

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omg thank you soo much this is kinda personal too me i mean like the whole meaning behind it txxxx thank you xxx chloe xxxxx

Mon, March 28th, 2011 2:27am

Kryptonite

It is so good i could picture all the emotion and images.

Sun, March 27th, 2011 2:47pm

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wow thank you soo much xxxxx chloe xxxxx :)

Mon, March 28th, 2011 2:28am

Fishcake

Gripping and haunting. Very well written. Very well done x

Thu, May 5th, 2011 4:03pm

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thank yoooo !! ^^) xx chloe xxx

Thu, May 5th, 2011 12:01pm

Nocturnal Writer

This is a haunting poem and I have to say that it caught/held my attention. I have a small attention span and only read novels and poems if they are good and can actually hold my attention. This poem was brilliant and I would love to see what your stories are like too. This poem was like a short story in poem form. Brilliant Idea! You have alot of talent so keep up the good work and KMU on new poems you write kay. :D

Mon, June 27th, 2011 2:10pm

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wow thank you , you have commented on alot of my work so for that i thank you QQQQxxx clhoe xxxx ^^)

Mon, June 27th, 2011 8:48am

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