One Night Was It All Took

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Booksie Classic
One mistake for this girl was all it took to have her where she is now. Though she has a loving family.

Submitted: May 30, 2008

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One night was all it took. One night of pleasure and pain made all the difference of mine and his life. I was on top of him panting wanting more and more from him. I knew this was wrong, especially the fact that we weren't using protection. He thought he could control himself from coming inside of me. He always pulled away before I had the chance to feel pure ectasy, but tonight was different. I was on top of him and it hurt like hell to have him inside of me, but once he knew he was about to come, he warned me to pull off. Though I was lost in my own world as he came and so did I. I never had this feeling with him before until then. I looked at him horrified of what I just did. He didn't even pull away, besides if he tried he couldn't, because like I said I was on top of him. He laughed to himself and I wondered what was so funny "What are you laughing about Terious?"I said annoyed. He looked me in the eyes with all the darkness and said "Well along time ago I made a bet with a friend that I wouldn't get girl pregnant until I graduated from college. He bet I get a girl pregnant before I left High School. He won.Well we're not friends anymore so it doesn't matter" he now looked to the side. For some reason I didn't care what he said, my body was asking for more of him. I drew close to his face and told him I wanted more. So we went at it again and again until finally we both heard his mother coming to the apartment and opening the door. Yes I forgot to mention that little detail. We were in his mom's apartment since he said that she would be gone till twelve in the morning, he guessed wrong. So right away I jumped off of him, pulled on my pants laid down on the couch and made it look like I was taking a nap. His mom came inside yelling at him in spanish. I didn't understand any word of what she said, but she sound mad. I wanted to make a quick exit, but he wanted to walk me home. I agreed to let him walk me, but right when we were about to leave I realize I left my bra on the side of his mother's couch. he went back to get it and his belt. He first had to go to his mom's car and get something. At the same time I was figuring out how to put on my bra. He told me to put it on in the car and that didn't work out too good. Then his dad was there to pick him up so I left walking home by myself. I notice there was an empty space with a giant tree, so I went behind the tree to put on my bra real quick and continued walking home. When I got home, both my sister-in-law and my mom were nagging on me where I was. I sat by my sister-in-law because I knew if she smelled me she wouldn't say anything. So anyways I started up an argument where I'm the victim and everything blew over without my mom smelling me. Then my brother came home awhile later with a whisky bottle and offers me three shots outside and I took them like nothing. I was freaked after what happen so I needed something to calm my nerves. I soon went inside early and my brother came in awhile later offering me two more shots, I took them gladly. Then when my brother wasn't listening I told my sister-in-law what happened to me earlier. That's all I remembered till the next day. I woke up with a big time hangover and went to school with a headache that pained me. During my passing periods to my second period I met up with him and another friend of ours, Emma. I told them that I had drank whisky last night and Terious gave me a look that said 'Your killing the baby before it's even born' I wanted to ask if that was what he was thinking but I decided not to. Well I didn't meet up with him until my fifth period and I still had my hang over. I didn't feel so good, I just sat there trying not to throw up. He looked at me with concern but he didn't say anything. At the end of the day I went home since he got checked out during his last period. The next day came and we didn't talk much, but he still gave me that look from yesterday. It wasn't until the end of the day I asked him why he has been giving me that look since yesterday since I told him what I did at home. He looked me in the eyes "Solemn, your killing a baby before it's even born, I don't want you to do that" he said. I knew it, I knew I was right and he was right I couldn'tdo that again. Then I started talking to him about names and he said if it's a boy he wants him name after him. I told him I didn't want that and we argued until I made an agreement "If it's a boy I'll name him after you, but with a choice of name of mine at the end. If it's a girl I get to name her, understand" he understood and gave me a kiss and pat on the butt as we left walking home. Now today I was mad, cranky, my stomach hurt, and I wanted to beat someone up. In fifth period he had this girl leave me alone because he didn't want me upset. Then he got me upset the way he treated me when I tried to stand for myself and beat her up "Solemn, Sit" the girl laughed "Look you're being treated like a dog" that got me mad at him and her. I walked away and sat somewhere else. Then I reminded him that I had something of his and he came to talk to me and then the girl came to apologize and gave me a hug I threw her off and went away agin. They went back to the table and left me alone. Then I eyed something else of his and got up to take it away without him noticing. At the end of the class we talked and I felt somewhat better until I saw his blonde bitch friend hug him. I wasn't so happy so I left him there while I took away his precious little MP3. At the end of the day we talked it over and I was happy again. Everything is good until now(eight months later), I am sitting at home ready to give birth and he wasn't here. Luckily Emma lived with us, so she took me to the hospital and also try to contact him. When the baby was crowning he came rushng in with nurse cover and mask "I'm sorry, I'm sorry" he said repeatedly. I didn't care about him right now I just wanted this baby out. He tried to grab hold of my hand but my hand slipped right over what created this and I squeezed hard. I notice he was close to tears but I didn't care. The baby was now out of me, but I was coming again. Apparently I had twins, and it was crowning to and I grabbed ahold of him again in the same place. The doctors took the babies away to run test while I laid panting. I let go of him already and I looked him straight in the eye "You're not getting any, for a long time, and don't you dare try to cheat on me" I stated. He smiled even though he was in pain and kissed my forehead "I would never do that to you or to those two little precious creations, you three are my everything" he kissed me on my eyelids as I fell back and go off into a slumber. Six little words slipped out of my lips "One night was all it took" and I fell asleep.


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